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Array ( [sid] => 163987 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => NEITHER EVER DIES [time] => 2010-12-29 19:38:58 [hometext] => Not from a lifes tragedy,just started writing till done ! [bodytext] => Me & my brother ~ Used to play around,
One gun after another ~ Just don't make a sound,
Mama didn't seem to care ~ Dad always said don't touch,
How precious are your prayers ~ Or how mad is your love,
Life is always here,
& then it's gone,
Nothing is nice about these tears,
Especially when the end is so long,
~
I remember when mama always said ~ Why don't you go outside & play,
The TV was playing in her head ~ As everything else started to fade,
My little brother had a toy ~ But my gun was a little to real,
Every shot was to bring us joy ~ If this is fun how should I feel,
Black lightning flashed all around,
I wish it was all make believe,
I wasn't supposed to make a sound,
Instead a fallen rose shattered a dream,
~
Daddy finally got rid of his guns ~ & mama can't stand the TV,
I lost a brother & my parents a son ~ & from the inside I bleed,
Just think the next time we play ~ We'll both be underground,
Please forgive me for our love will never fade ~ & I promise to not make a sound,
Even heaven has its thorns,
But angels still fly,
When one is born.....
NEITHER EVER DIES ! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 137 [topic] => 13 [informant] => loveisendless [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
NEITHER EVER DIES

Contributed by loveisendless on Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 07:38:58 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Me & my brother ~ Used to play around,
One gun after another ~ Just don't make a sound,
Mama didn't seem to care ~ Dad always said don't touch,
How precious are your prayers ~ Or how mad is your love,
Life is always here,
& then it's gone,
Nothing is nice about these tears,
Especially when the end is so long,
~
I remember when mama always said ~ Why don't you go outside & play,
The TV was playing in her head ~ As everything else started to fade,
My little brother had a toy ~ But my gun was a little to real,
Every shot was to bring us joy ~ If this is fun how should I feel,
Black lightning flashed all around,
I wish it was all make believe,
I wasn't supposed to make a sound,
Instead a fallen rose shattered a dream,
~
Daddy finally got rid of his guns ~ & mama can't stand the TV,
I lost a brother & my parents a son ~ & from the inside I bleed,
Just think the next time we play ~ We'll both be underground,
Please forgive me for our love will never fade ~ & I promise to not make a sound,
Even heaven has its thorns,
But angels still fly,
When one is born.....
NEITHER EVER DIES !




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Re: NEITHER EVER DIES (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 08:40:02 PM AEST
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Happy 2 know it's just writing.
Where have u been?
Blessings,
emy


Re: NEITHER EVER DIES (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 28th July 2020 @ 12:45:57 AM AEST
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Crazy.....




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