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Array ( [sid] => 163961 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm not worth fixing. [time] => 2010-12-28 16:17:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Guess what?
you can't fix me,
you can only make me better.
i wish you could see,
im not worth fixing.

one mistake after a nother,
i keep messing up.
i cant do anything right,
after a while there is nothing left you can say.

would they call it life?
with all my screw ups and let downs?
they just keep coming,
and an end not following.

i'm always going to be,
the one who needs fixinf.
never will i be,
the one who is perfect.

im not worth your time,
so just stop trying.
i'm not worth fixing,
so just give up. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 262 [topic] => 63 [informant] => potentialpoet96 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )

I'm not worth fixing.

Contributed by potentialpoet96 on Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 04:17:47 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

Guess what?
you can't fix me,
you can only make me better.
i wish you could see,
im not worth fixing.

one mistake after a nother,
i keep messing up.
i cant do anything right,
after a while there is nothing left you can say.

would they call it life?
with all my screw ups and let downs?
they just keep coming,
and an end not following.

i'm always going to be,
the one who needs fixinf.
never will i be,
the one who is perfect.

im not worth your time,
so just stop trying.
i'm not worth fixing,
so just give up.

Copyright © potentialpoet96 ... [ 2010-12-28 16:17:47]
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Re: I'm not worth fixing. (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 10:04:46 PM AEST
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A gut wrenching write calling on all that believe to give up and walk away. Perfection is unattainable and can be the heavy that destroys so many. Raw and well written lines full of sorrow.

duff

Re: I'm not worth fixing. (User Rating: 1 )
by hacktastic on Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 01:24:39 AM AEST
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If there ever was a commentary on humanity, this is it. I often liken life to baseball players. A record of 3 out of 10 hits can make you pro. People forget that. There are many learning experiences on the journey through life.

That said, the only thing that needs to be fixed here is punctuation. But, that may be intended, as part of the poem to further illustrate accepting imperfection - I dunno'. If I am right, maybe add a misspelllingg or two to further emphasize the point.

Overall, nice expression of your feelings. They come across very clear.

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