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Array ( [sid] => 163929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I am alive [time] => 2010-12-26 19:24:53 [hometext] => Sometimes the ones your there for the most will never appreciate you A simple poem explaining a simple situation , enjoy. [bodytext] => Desperate cries angry with the faceless
All I am , and all the love
hungers in the mire

A will frozen in the wind
not to hide
for you and mine
Hear my reflections of my cries
I am alive

Cast in shame..
For your dismay
Point at me too decrease the silence
Malodorous I cant deny you
Juggling the thought of reason
Is this pity?

Hiding inside myself
how could i see inside you
Like the childrens words who fell into apathy
And the ears that for shadowed this yearning
I am alive

The ground nows topples from above
swallowing the emotions left behind

Breaking...

The cries bellowed into sun
burning all that I kept inside
I kneel to you in mourning
Desperate to hear your vents
the vents that triggered this puzzle of unperturbed bliss
when will you see

I am alive

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 21 [informant] => hungarianhaze [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

I am alive

Contributed by hungarianhaze on Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 07:24:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Desperate cries angry with the faceless
All I am , and all the love
hungers in the mire

A will frozen in the wind
not to hide
for you and mine
Hear my reflections of my cries
I am alive

Cast in shame..
For your dismay
Point at me too decrease the silence
Malodorous I cant deny you
Juggling the thought of reason
Is this pity?

Hiding inside myself
how could i see inside you
Like the childrens words who fell into apathy
And the ears that for shadowed this yearning
I am alive

The ground nows topples from above
swallowing the emotions left behind

Breaking...

The cries bellowed into sun
burning all that I kept inside
I kneel to you in mourning
Desperate to hear your vents
the vents that triggered this puzzle of unperturbed bliss
when will you see

I am alive

Copyright © hungarianhaze ... [ 2010-12-26 19:24:53]
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Re: I am alive (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 08:53:05 PM AEST
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Well a fool would think u r dead cause this is an incredible write. Awesome.
Good work.
blessings,
emy

Re: I am alive (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 09:29:20 AM AEST
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Wow... that was absolutely amazing. It was so beautifully written, with depth in every passage. I loved every minute of it, and you finished it perfectly with the last line! I can feel your anguish. I also had a woman that did not appreciate me. It is best to forget about such people, as they will just use you.

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