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Array ( [sid] => 163890 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Since I Lost You [time] => 2010-12-23 17:29:43 [hometext] => This was just a random poem I wrote when I realised I missed someone alot more then I was willing to admit to myself [bodytext] => I spent a long time wondering

My mind just would sleep

I spent so many nights

So alone and cold

Since that day

Years fly so by so fast

Only to be over before you can truely live

Under blackened skies I lay

Beneath the darkened sky I dwell

Every second passes without due care

You never said it would be like this

Once a light amonst the shadows

Now just a hole in the sky

Darkness creeps back into my mind

Convincing me it was right

Only the pain is real

May death come quickly

Pay my price and begone

All I want is the end

Relentless the memories come

Even as I die

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Since I Lost You

Contributed by Rx1471 on Thursday, 23rd December 2010 @ 05:29:43 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I spent a long time wondering

My mind just would sleep

I spent so many nights

So alone and cold

Since that day

Years fly so by so fast

Only to be over before you can truely live

Under blackened skies I lay

Beneath the darkened sky I dwell

Every second passes without due care

You never said it would be like this

Once a light amonst the shadows

Now just a hole in the sky

Darkness creeps back into my mind

Convincing me it was right

Only the pain is real

May death come quickly

Pay my price and begone

All I want is the end

Relentless the memories come

Even as I die

Copyright © Rx1471 ... [ 2010-12-23 17:29:43]
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Re: Since I Lost You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 23rd December 2010 @ 05:47:00 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
Blessings,
emy

Re: Since I Lost You (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 02:49:30 AM AEST
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Such saddness in this one
well done

Re: Since I Lost You (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 04:44:01 AM AEST
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The pain that comes with losing someone is one of the hardest things a person can deal with in life. I wish you all the best, and hope that you can move on and try to find a decent person to fill that hole. And try to have some fun!

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