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Array ( [sid] => 163855 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Suicide [time] => 2010-12-22 00:54:49 [hometext] => I am Sorry [bodytext] => My Suicide

As i Sit on the floor in corner of my Room
i stare for hours with tears in the Mirror
My Reflection is Frightend . Filled with terror .

My Suicide my Suicide

you think you kno me but you dont
you kno the girl who acts as if shes not hurt
im bruised for life . Enternal Bleeding
It hurts soo bad its an Angry Feeling

my suicide , my suicide

My Smile is Fake
This feeling wont escape
Soo i'll escape it .
Leaving my Body and this face
noo more lies .
i am not happy .
i wont pretend now that the fear has stabbed me

My suicide my Suicide

My body wont move
i am frozed i am doomed
i am asamed of these thoughts im so confused

So its my suicide

i take these pills then start to panic
my emotions disappear
this is how i'll have it
the clock is ticking .
my time will soon be up
i am no longer trapped , i am no longer stuck
i'll leave this body these ***** feelings
i wont be confused cus these pills will heal me


I hate my thoughts .
I want them to End .
Soo i take these pills one more time once again
i close my eyes praying to god he lets me die
i'll leave this note bald in my hand
This is my Goodbye it all will end

Dear suicide my suicde will you be my bestfriend ? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 14 [informant] => TheGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
My Suicide

Contributed by TheGirl on Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 12:54:49 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



My Suicide

As i Sit on the floor in corner of my Room
i stare for hours with tears in the Mirror
My Reflection is Frightend . Filled with terror .

My Suicide my Suicide

you think you kno me but you dont
you kno the girl who acts as if shes not hurt
im bruised for life . Enternal Bleeding
It hurts soo bad its an Angry Feeling

my suicide , my suicide

My Smile is Fake
This feeling wont escape
Soo i'll escape it .
Leaving my Body and this face
noo more lies .
i am not happy .
i wont pretend now that the fear has stabbed me

My suicide my Suicide

My body wont move
i am frozed i am doomed
i am asamed of these thoughts im so confused

So its my suicide

i take these pills then start to panic
my emotions disappear
this is how i'll have it
the clock is ticking .
my time will soon be up
i am no longer trapped , i am no longer stuck
i'll leave this body these ***** feelings
i wont be confused cus these pills will heal me


I hate my thoughts .
I want them to End .
Soo i take these pills one more time once again
i close my eyes praying to god he lets me die
i'll leave this note bald in my hand
This is my Goodbye it all will end

Dear suicide my suicde will you be my bestfriend ?




Copyright © TheGirl ... [ 2010-12-22 00:54:49]
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Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 01:20:22 AM AEST
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A very deep poem expressing a very deep mental state. And well written too.


Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Dirkj on Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 01:54:52 AM AEST
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It's a bit scary but well done




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