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Expected
Contributed by
Broncomark12
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Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 09:03:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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I guess I'm still here, no need for a cure.
Why shed a tear, when I'm still not sure?
Why should I smile, when I feel fine?
And time is a dile, but you can't have mine.
The sky is sharing, or so I've heard.
I hate hearing, what's spoken is slurred.
Beneath the ground, there's so many stars.
Fissure is sound, released without bars.
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Broncomark12
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2010-12-21 21:03:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Expected
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 09:41:54 PM AEST (User
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Strong poem and flows nicely. I really like it |
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Re: Expected
(User Rating: 1 ) by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 12:41:46 AM AEST (User
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Rather confusing to me, but then it is abstract. Would like to know the intention of the poem. |
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