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The Stench Of A LifeTime
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 08:39:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I've been dreaming
that I was leaving
this hollow existence
the stench of a life time
overwhelms
when there's no healing,
the importance of nothing
is dominating my thinking
Illusions are flowing
keeping me off balanced,
there's no healthy survival
in the shadows unattached
as emotional warfare
tortures and rips me apart,
in this burning confusion
I am trying to hold on
but
I feel myself slipping
as my hands of clay melt.
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unknown_utopia
... [
2010-12-21 20:39:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Stench Of A LifeTime
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 08:56:40 PM AEST (User
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I am sorry you are inhaling "the stench" of life. I hope life gets better for you. I loved this poem. I could feel your pain so strongly. I can definitely relate to what you're going through. Again, terrific writing.
Heidi |
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Re: The Stench Of A LifeTime
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 01:57:59 AM AEST (User
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A very fine, if somewhat sad, piece of writing. This oozes personal despair like no other I've read. You have a very fine talent and I'm sure this alone will help pull you through. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: The Stench Of A LifeTime
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenniferswe on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 01:57:24 PM AEST (User
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Excellent! |
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Re: The Stench Of A LifeTime
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 02:53:48 PM AEST (User
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Woops guess I missed some..
Hope you've cheered up since this write.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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