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To find another soul like me,validity,
There's something in those lines,
Something I struggle to define,
Do you know me?
Of course that couldn't be,
But the more I read,
I must concede,
It's unfathomable,
Your parallel parable,
Has described my need,
You can't know me,
I wish you were she,
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Your parallel parable

Contributed by huwbeauty on Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 04:25:12 AM in AEST
Topic: poets

I study your lines and look for symmetry,familiarity,
To find another soul like me,validity,
There's something in those lines,
Something I struggle to define,
Do you know me?
Of course that couldn't be,
But the more I read,
I must concede,
It's unfathomable,
Your parallel parable,
Has described my need,
You can't know me,
I wish you were she,
Because she was my autumn leaves.

Copyright © huwbeauty ... [ 2010-12-16 04:25:12]
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Re: Your parallel parable (User Rating: 1 )
by DrcGaimer on Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 08:04:11 AM AEST
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Isn't it amazing to how a stranger can be so familiar. nice.

Re: Your parallel parable (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 08:47:50 AM AEST
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You are clearly very talented and this piece brings that talent out on to the open page. It flows beautifully and I love it. Well done.

Re: Your parallel parable (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 08:47:53 AM AEST
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You are clearly very talented and this piece brings that talent out on to the open page. It flows beautifully and I love it. Well done.

Re: Your parallel parable (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 11:06:30 AM AEST
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Inspiration is an awesome thing and how unpredictable it can be keeps us writers on our toes.Never knowing when it may come knocking majority of the time we welcome it. Your writing is a pleasure to read and something I look forward to.

duff

Re: Your parallel parable (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 03:03:15 AM AEST
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What a lovely personable write full of warmth as though speaking face to face with the person.

Re: Your parallel parable (User Rating: 1 )
by RowenM on Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 09:31:15 AM AEST
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I swear....you've touched me.
This is an amazing write.
It's real, sincere, and well written.
It's amazing.
You are a terrific writer!
Well done.

Re: Your parallel parable (User Rating: 1 )
by petulinka on Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 04:05:50 PM AEST
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its so pure..i mean look outside where do you find pureness in what..is there any left and if it is do we know how to use it?..well, i dont know the answers maybe in next poem you display them between lines?:)..anyways, its great!!:)

Re: Your parallel parable (User Rating: 1 )
by hungarianhaze on Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 08:00:05 PM AEST
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I love this , this reminds me of my "pseudo with love" poem! I really enjoyed this piece

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