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Take Me For I Am Yours
Contributed by
hacktastic
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Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 11:18:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Take my dreams and take my mind
My Souls breath, to you I bind
Take me, for I love you more
Than I ever loved before.
The oceans waves kiss sandy shores
Like brown eyes look into blue
The moon was made for the sky to hold,
And I was made for you.
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Re: Take Me For I Am Yours
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by Dirkj on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 11:52:34 PM AEST
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| it's short and i can understand what you are saying, nice work |
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Re: Take Me For I Am Yours
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 01:55:57 AM AEST
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Nice one! This was the highlight of the poem:
"The oceans waves kiss sandy shores
Like brown eyes look into blue"
beautifully imaginative! |
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