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Array ( [sid] => 163675 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => He Sent Me The Winter Breeze. [time] => 2010-12-13 00:52:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => He return back again after a season
The flowers bloom and butterflies dance
The moon brighten and stars lighten

I then love myself, I love to smile
He loves my wet hair, my hazel eyes
I then love to dress myself just for him

I start to believe once again in love,
I start to believe once again in worship
Then I start to believe again in devotion

There is no love as I have with me now
But this is what I thought that I have
It was just an open eye dream that I saw

He came, he met, and then he left
Flowers died, butterflies cried
My heart ached, hazel eyes cried

Seasons changed again from autumn to winter
Then I heard a sound and a swish, he’s back again
I rush, I run, I hurry and I open the door

There was no one just the wind, the snow and me
I stand, I close my eyes and the wind whispered,
“He couldn’t come, but he sent you this winter breeze” [comments] => 4 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 22 [informant] => anbarean [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

He Sent Me The Winter Breeze.

Contributed by anbarean on Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 12:52:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

He return back again after a season
The flowers bloom and butterflies dance
The moon brighten and stars lighten

I then love myself, I love to smile
He loves my wet hair, my hazel eyes
I then love to dress myself just for him

I start to believe once again in love,
I start to believe once again in worship
Then I start to believe again in devotion

There is no love as I have with me now
But this is what I thought that I have
It was just an open eye dream that I saw

He came, he met, and then he left
Flowers died, butterflies cried
My heart ached, hazel eyes cried

Seasons changed again from autumn to winter
Then I heard a sound and a swish, he’s back again
I rush, I run, I hurry and I open the door

There was no one just the wind, the snow and me
I stand, I close my eyes and the wind whispered,
“He couldn’t come, but he sent you this winter breeze”

Copyright Â© anbarean ... [ 2010-12-13 00:52:44]
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Re: He Sent Me The Winter Breeze. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 12:57:12 AM AEST
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I am guessing that English is not your first language and with that, that makes this even more respectable that you still give it a great effort. There is beauty and there is pain in it. I feel them both.

Thanks,

Tim

Re: He Sent Me The Winter Breeze. (User Rating: 1 )
by RowenM on Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 11:05:52 AM AEST
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Though i had to read it twice to actually get something out of it, i still think it is a great work.

Re: He Sent Me The Winter Breeze. (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 02:39:49 AM AEST
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There's a real warmth running through this, I think reflecting the heart of the writer, and great imagery to reflect the sadness and pain as I can imagine just the breeze against a tear stained face of anticipation.well written

Re: He Sent Me The Winter Breeze. (User Rating: 1 )
by whitt on Wednesday, 16th February 2011 @ 12:58:41 PM AEST
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i love the 5th stanza the most for some reason :P but in general its a lovely lovely poem !

-Whittley

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