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Array ( [sid] => 1636 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Live Or Die [time] => 2002-08-02 20:39:49 [hometext] => I wrote this when I was all depressive and my friend, Ashley, taught me that nothing was worth taking ym life for. I love you, Ash! [bodytext] => Lying on the floor,
the room is spinning.
Morbid thoughts of not living,
Just can't take much more,
and can you blame me?
Is a life worth living
if it's lived in misery?
Tears of blood touch the floor,
tears of salt kiss me more.
Can't find love, care, or trust,
those things in life are a must.
No luck here, I am cursed.
Can't seem to keep trust,
Mistaking love for lust.
Oh, God what could be worse?
Live on, I say.
Things will change,
someday things will go your way.
But I lie, and I know there are worse things.
I couldn't imagine it getting any worse,
I wish this life upon no one,
My lips won't allow such a curse.
But it'll be over soon,
Joy I find in that thought.
No more living with depression,
with which so long, I've fought.
Can't eat, Can't sleep,
Can't even care any more.
So what's the sense in being here?
Cries sweat from my pores.
It's over now, getting dark,
but yet, it's always been.
I'm going to much happier now,
don't forget me my friends...

I guess that means I care,
enough to be remembered..
And my stomach is growling,
can't control my temper.
What the F***, make up my mind!!
Do I want to live or die?
I guess now it is too late
for me to try and change my fate.
I've chosen already,
a dumb thoughtless decision.
Between me and life,
a line of division.
A permanent end to
a temporary problem.
OH NO! I do want to live!
But blood cells are running..
Now I just can't stop them.
How F***ed up am I
to wanna die so soon?
I've learned my lesson the
hard way, and if you aren't careful...
Some day you will, too..


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Crys [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Live Or Die

Contributed by Crys on Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 08:39:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Lying on the floor,
the room is spinning.
Morbid thoughts of not living,
Just can't take much more,
and can you blame me?
Is a life worth living
if it's lived in misery?
Tears of blood touch the floor,
tears of salt kiss me more.
Can't find love, care, or trust,
those things in life are a must.
No luck here, I am cursed.
Can't seem to keep trust,
Mistaking love for lust.
Oh, God what could be worse?
Live on, I say.
Things will change,
someday things will go your way.
But I lie, and I know there are worse things.
I couldn't imagine it getting any worse,
I wish this life upon no one,
My lips won't allow such a curse.
But it'll be over soon,
Joy I find in that thought.
No more living with depression,
with which so long, I've fought.
Can't eat, Can't sleep,
Can't even care any more.
So what's the sense in being here?
Cries sweat from my pores.
It's over now, getting dark,
but yet, it's always been.
I'm going to much happier now,
don't forget me my friends...

I guess that means I care,
enough to be remembered..
And my stomach is growling,
can't control my temper.
What the F***, make up my mind!!
Do I want to live or die?
I guess now it is too late
for me to try and change my fate.
I've chosen already,
a dumb thoughtless decision.
Between me and life,
a line of division.
A permanent end to
a temporary problem.
OH NO! I do want to live!
But blood cells are running..
Now I just can't stop them.
How F***ed up am I
to wanna die so soon?
I've learned my lesson the
hard way, and if you aren't careful...
Some day you will, too..






Copyright © Crys ... [ 2002-08-02 20:39:49]
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Re: Live Or Die (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 12:48:06 AM AEST
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WOW I'm just so blow away by this poem. I can't really express how I feel about this poem. But its really good and very well expressed. Its sad and touching on a painful level I can't express, although it makes me think about myself and how I am, not knowing myself and all. You are very lucky to have a friend to help you get through the worst time in your life. If truly you truly believe in your heart that there's something to live for than there is.


Re: Live Or Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Crys on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 02:30:12 AM AEST
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Thank you very much. I havent really visited the page in a while so i had no idea that u commented.. but ive been waiting to see what someone had to say about this poem, for it is one of my faves...I appreciate ur feedback. :)~




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