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Array ( [sid] => 163595 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A little rain [time] => 2010-12-08 00:03:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I thought of you again today
once more you silenty crept in
and rested inside my thoughts
then left once more with the wind.

Decemember rains began to fall
the wind tossed dead branches around.
A storm oh yes a storm
kind of like the one inside my heart.

I walked for a while in the wind and rain
it began to sting my skin.
Watching dead leaves swirl from ground to sky
listening to the howling haunted wind.

I thought of you again today
then in the winds those thoughts softly drifted....away
a storm oh yes a raging Decemember storm
stiring with my heart.......

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A little rain

Contributed by shelby on Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 12:03:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I thought of you again today
once more you silenty crept in
and rested inside my thoughts
then left once more with the wind.

Decemember rains began to fall
the wind tossed dead branches around.
A storm oh yes a storm
kind of like the one inside my heart.

I walked for a while in the wind and rain
it began to sting my skin.
Watching dead leaves swirl from ground to sky
listening to the howling haunted wind.

I thought of you again today
then in the winds those thoughts softly drifted....away
a storm oh yes a raging Decemember storm
stiring with my heart.......

a little rain mixed with my day

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2010-12-08 00:03:41]
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Re: A little rain (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 10:52:47 AM AEST
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The imagery you used is excellent and there is a haunting feeling to your words. You painted a storm beautifully and this was a pleasure to read.

duff

Re: A little rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 08:19:18 PM AEST
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I absolutely love this poem, especially the very first stanza. It also sort of reminded me of something that happened at work last night but I'll save the rest of that for a pm on another day.

Great work, Michelle!

Re: A little rain (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 10:51:36 AM AEST
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I absolutely LOVE this piece. I can feel the intensity and the storm on my stinging skin, and the storm in my heart. :)

Re: A little rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Nonefound on Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 02:51:20 AM AEST
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I like that well written

Re: A little rain (User Rating: 1 )
by T-Bear on Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 10:05:35 AM AEST
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I feel your pain in the piece...

Re: A little rain (User Rating: 1 )
by PoetMasterDani on Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 07:00:18 AM AEST
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I really liked it. great emotion behind it all :) great work

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