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Since I was pitted against the evils,
And doomed to chase them,
Across the caverns of my mind,
I traced their every step.

I have been behind them,
For so long that I lost my motives,
Yet an unknown feeling,
Of disgust, distrust and despise,
Fuels me against them.

They taunt me as I proceed,
They set traps for me in every step,
They wait for the moment,
When the darkness falls,
And engulfs the land for claim.

I‘ve lost but all that would concern me,
Yet I cannot forfeit,
As I hope for the nearing end,
I hope for the evils vanishing abyssal,
And my one final triumph.

So why is it that,
I shudder the moment for it to end,
As the chase nears a halt,
My feet began to tremble,
In the fear of impuzzlement.

I fear the time is near,
When I will catch up on the evils,
And the judgment will befall me,
And I would lie speechless,
For I would have no answer.

I can do nothing,
But ponder my fate,
As I pray for strength,
For I have to mourn,
For a doomed eternity.
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The Lost Triumphant

Contributed by Priyashrav on Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 08:49:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

It has been a long time,
Since I was pitted against the evils,
And doomed to chase them,
Across the caverns of my mind,
I traced their every step.

I have been behind them,
For so long that I lost my motives,
Yet an unknown feeling,
Of disgust, distrust and despise,
Fuels me against them.

They taunt me as I proceed,
They set traps for me in every step,
They wait for the moment,
When the darkness falls,
And engulfs the land for claim.

I‘ve lost but all that would concern me,
Yet I cannot forfeit,
As I hope for the nearing end,
I hope for the evils vanishing abyssal,
And my one final triumph.

So why is it that,
I shudder the moment for it to end,
As the chase nears a halt,
My feet began to tremble,
In the fear of impuzzlement.

I fear the time is near,
When I will catch up on the evils,
And the judgment will befall me,
And I would lie speechless,
For I would have no answer.

I can do nothing,
But ponder my fate,
As I pray for strength,
For I have to mourn,
For a doomed eternity.

Copyright Â© Priyashrav ... [ 2010-12-05 20:49:42]
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Re: The Lost Triumphant (User Rating: 1 )
by NewGuy on Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 09:44:04 PM AEST
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wow, excellent write. I really enjoyed it. You mirrored some of my own feelings on a few i ahve done. very well done nice job

Re: The Lost Triumphant (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 03:54:10 AM AEST
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Dark,dark,dark.Love it.

Re: The Lost Triumphant (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 12:23:53 AM AEST
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deep write, and very nicely written
well done, like it
take care

Anbarean

Re: The Lost Triumphant (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 09:42:13 AM AEST
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Catching up with and defeating one's evils is one of the most difficult things a person can do. Facing judgment for them is even more difficult. This is a very deep and thought provoking write. Thanks you.

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