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Array ( [sid] => 163562 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Doomed [time] => 2010-12-05 19:04:33 [hometext] => Long time since I posted a poem. It would really mean a lot if you could read and comment. [bodytext] => Living in a lonesome world.
A world in which I loath.
I wish for once, a human being,
Can give to me some hope.

A little hope is all I need,
To get me through this life.
I’ve searched and searched for many years,
But all I’ve found were lies.

Lying people everywhere.
There seems to be no break.
All my courage now is gone.
And fear now takes it’s place.

I dream and dream, and dream some more.
But dreams are all I’ve got.
Cause when I wake I see the truth.
The real world is a crock.

I know this poem is far from sweet.
No happy ending looms.
But this is how I’m feeling now.
So lost inside my doom.
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Doomed

Contributed by Nevilleconnie on Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 07:04:33 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Living in a lonesome world.
A world in which I loath.
I wish for once, a human being,
Can give to me some hope.

A little hope is all I need,
To get me through this life.
I’ve searched and searched for many years,
But all I’ve found were lies.

Lying people everywhere.
There seems to be no break.
All my courage now is gone.
And fear now takes it’s place.

I dream and dream, and dream some more.
But dreams are all I’ve got.
Cause when I wake I see the truth.
The real world is a crock.

I know this poem is far from sweet.
No happy ending looms.
But this is how I’m feeling now.
So lost inside my doom.

Copyright Â© Nevilleconnie ... [ 2010-12-05 19:04:33]
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Re: Doomed (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 07:12:43 PM AEST
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Very true, clear and nice way of your writing and exppressing in a poem.
Love it ....
Takecare

Anbarean

Re: Doomed (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 02:32:30 AM AEST
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Really good,I feel the loneliness and the disappointment with the world.

Re: Doomed (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 7th December 2010 @ 11:44:04 PM AEST
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I am glad to see you back.
I relate to this poem so deeply dear friend.
I feel each word and know this pain.

I wish for you peace, I have a tear running down my cheek.

Hugs you tight
Michelle

Re: Doomed (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 01:41:42 PM AEST
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i love how you expressed yourself in this poem. so i liked every ounce of it.

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