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Array ( [sid] => 16354 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => When I fell in love with you. [time] => 2003-04-21 16:25:00 [hometext] =>
[bodytext] => I feel in love with you over the summer
On July 16, 2002
I wrote about the heartache that I went through.
I wrote about the tears that were caused.
That day I ran out to check the mail
as shitty as life was going
I ran out of gas
Got out of my truck and sat on my ass
Sitting there I cried my eyes out
daddy pulled up and aske me to into the car.
we went to the store

I hopped to see you
but I didn't
I cryed to think you were with krista
it saddened me to think of it

When I called your house
your brother told me you went for a walk
so i thought
ok whatever
I called back 2 hours later and they couldn't find you..

It scared me, I called Krista to ask where you were
Erica and her lied to me
When you were really right there

I cried my eyes out for hours
when it come to find you were there

After everything happened I discovered I love you
Thats my story I come to an end
I love you and that it
I want you more than a friend. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 277 [topic] => 43 [informant] => notgoodenough [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

When I fell in love with you.

Contributed by notgoodenough on Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I feel in love with you over the summer
On July 16, 2002
I wrote about the heartache that I went through.
I wrote about the tears that were caused.
That day I ran out to check the mail
as shitty as life was going
I ran out of gas
Got out of my truck and sat on my ass
Sitting there I cried my eyes out
daddy pulled up and aske me to into the car.
we went to the store

I hopped to see you
but I didn't
I cryed to think you were with krista
it saddened me to think of it

When I called your house
your brother told me you went for a walk
so i thought
ok whatever
I called back 2 hours later and they couldn't find you..

It scared me, I called Krista to ask where you were
Erica and her lied to me
When you were really right there

I cried my eyes out for hours
when it come to find you were there

After everything happened I discovered I love you
Thats my story I come to an end
I love you and that it
I want you more than a friend.

Copyright © notgoodenough ... [ 2003-04-21 16:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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