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tears that don't fall

they scrape the inside

of my eyes, with

words that shifted

from my lips &

dodged the feelings

of my heart that

fell on deaf ears

& your mind was

made of mud &

arms of stone

that held no love

for me who died

to have you live

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I give. . .

Contributed by elle on Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 06:52:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I give. . .

tears that don't fall

they scrape the inside

of my eyes, with

words that shifted

from my lips &

dodged the feelings

of my heart that

fell on deaf ears

& your mind was

made of mud &

arms of stone

that held no love

for me who died

to have you live

I give. . .

Copyright © elle ... [ 2010-12-03 06:52:44]
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Re: I give. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 10:32:13 AM AEST
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I have always enjoyed your writing elle because it's smart and there is always something quite profound beneath the surface of your words and I love when a writer can do that. This is nothing short of exceptional and it's a pleasure as always to read your work.

duff

Re: I give. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 10:54:57 AM AEST
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That feeling of giving in or giving up has haunted me many times your words struck up some old memories. This was a great poem, and I imagine took a lot to write great job!

Re: I give. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 12:25:37 AM AEST
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Brilliant!!! I love the way this seems to be one long exhale after taking this deep breath as you let it all out. I also love the way you express the fact that you were giving and then with the same exact words gave up in the end. Been there, done that but not quite so eloquently in poetic verse.

Re: I give. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 09:15:45 AM AEST
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This really is a remarkable piece of writing. The words you use to express your inner most feelings are northing short of brilliant. Thanks for sharing.

Re: I give. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by hetlerkh on Monday, 7th February 2011 @ 04:30:09 AM AEST
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amazzziiiiiiiiiiing ! !!
i'd do any thing to be able to express like u ! :D

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