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Again she fades away like yesterdays passion

Sunsets over sandy footprints bullied by the storm

A sharpened thorn constantly poking at my insecurities

Come the nightfall she was always my rose

We took turns hurting one another without flinching nor

Caring about the transformation that would ensue

Destruction of character was crucial to purpose

She searched my eyes for one final kiss

And I wished for her tears to drown the hollow
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Strangers

Contributed by duff on Thursday, 2nd December 2010 @ 10:23:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Lost inside a puddles wrinkle I can see her face

Again she fades away like yesterdays passion

Sunsets over sandy footprints bullied by the storm

A sharpened thorn constantly poking at my insecurities

Come the nightfall she was always my rose

We took turns hurting one another without flinching nor

Caring about the transformation that would ensue

Destruction of character was crucial to purpose

She searched my eyes for one final kiss

And I wished for her tears to drown the hollow

Copyright © duff ... [ 2010-12-02 22:23:41]
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Re: Strangers (User Rating: 1 )
by Bexstasy on Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 05:24:56 AM AEST
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This is really deep... I love it!

Re: Strangers (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 10:52:16 AM AEST
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Wow duff this is awesome. Deep indeed and with with love and loss, your words came across powerfully. Very nice

Re: Strangers (User Rating: 1 )
by Outspoken on Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 08:43:42 PM AEST
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Excellent use of imagery. A thoroughly thought provoking read.

Re: Strangers (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 06:35:59 AM AEST
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Excellent again Duff.you always suck me in and leave me thinking.

Re: Strangers (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 09:18:05 AM AEST
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Hi Duff
Once again you have taken me on a journey of fine words and inner most thoughts. Absolutely brilliant. Well done.

Re: Strangers (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 07:18:44 PM AEST
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Your words always swirl me around the one MAIN statement..."A sharpened thorn constantly poking at my insecurities"
And this was the one the jumped out and grabbed me by the throat. Please squeeze out MORE!

ming

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