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Array ( [sid] => 163503 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To Give Myself to You [time] => 2010-12-01 10:17:05 [hometext] => Wrote this July of 2009 for a girl i am no longer with, but its a fav of mine. [bodytext] => When I look at you I gaze and ponder,
That's when my mind begins to wander.
And ever so more it makes me fonder,
To all my thoughts of you.

Your smell, your touch, your eyes, your face,
Seems to leave me in a place,
Where my heart begins to race,
With feelings that are true.

I've been broken once before,
And still today my heart is sore.
So this one thing I implore,
Brighten all my hue.

I am ready to try again.
My soul is broke but it can mend.
All my love to you I send,
For when your feeling blue.

So to you I give this task,
Don't break my heart, that's all I ask.
With our joined souls and hearts we bask,
Into something we're both due. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Jonathon_J_Young [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

To Give Myself to You

Contributed by Jonathon_J_Young on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 10:17:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When I look at you I gaze and ponder,
That's when my mind begins to wander.
And ever so more it makes me fonder,
To all my thoughts of you.

Your smell, your touch, your eyes, your face,
Seems to leave me in a place,
Where my heart begins to race,
With feelings that are true.

I've been broken once before,
And still today my heart is sore.
So this one thing I implore,
Brighten all my hue.

I am ready to try again.
My soul is broke but it can mend.
All my love to you I send,
For when your feeling blue.

So to you I give this task,
Don't break my heart, that's all I ask.
With our joined souls and hearts we bask,
Into something we're both due.

Copyright © Jonathon_J_Young ... [ 2010-12-01 10:17:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: To Give Myself to You (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 12:13:11 PM AEST
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well well well Jonathan,
This is the right poetry which I love to read
this is what I am too...I would love to read more of your poems and thankyou for sharing such nice piece of work....
Take care
Anbarean

Re: To Give Myself to You (User Rating: 1 )
by brialuv on Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 09:18:02 AM AEST
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beautiful! i love it i can relate to it now in fact..thanks for sharing

Re: To Give Myself to You (User Rating: 1 )
by Craze on Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 10:15:29 AM AEST
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I was not such a fan of the scheme her I felt like the flow would start to build and then crash but ur emotion is beautiful and your words are well placed good rite overall

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