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Array ( [sid] => 163484 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heartloss [time] => 2010-11-30 13:39:46 [hometext] => Dedicated to Stephanie Perry [bodytext] => This blunder is asunder,
The choice is in my voice.
At night it makes me wonder,
Of how I'll keep my poise.

You see, I've failed to tell you,
These matters of the heart.
The time to open up is due,
But I know not where to start.

When I wake into this world,
Your face first comes to mind.
Its like you've gotten my heart furled,
And kept it all this time.

I think of all the memories,
With you I wish to make.
I wish instead of your pure soul,
It's mine that death would take.

To share a single moment,
With you would bring me glee.
But time is a harsh enemy,
With a negative decree.

But as grim as things may seem,
Don't cry or sulk or frown.
I'll never be too far away,
To help you when your down.

No matter what the outcome,
Through thick, thin, black or blue.
Remember I'm not far away,
My heart belongs to you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Jonathon_J_Young [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Heartloss

Contributed by Jonathon_J_Young on Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 01:39:46 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

This blunder is asunder,
The choice is in my voice.
At night it makes me wonder,
Of how I'll keep my poise.

You see, I've failed to tell you,
These matters of the heart.
The time to open up is due,
But I know not where to start.

When I wake into this world,
Your face first comes to mind.
Its like you've gotten my heart furled,
And kept it all this time.

I think of all the memories,
With you I wish to make.
I wish instead of your pure soul,
It's mine that death would take.

To share a single moment,
With you would bring me glee.
But time is a harsh enemy,
With a negative decree.

But as grim as things may seem,
Don't cry or sulk or frown.
I'll never be too far away,
To help you when your down.

No matter what the outcome,
Through thick, thin, black or blue.
Remember I'm not far away,
My heart belongs to you.

Copyright © Jonathon_J_Young ... [ 2010-11-30 13:39:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Heartloss (User Rating: 1 )
by kleetas on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 05:22:28 AM AEST
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i know the pain of Perrys and Sunshine that they bring ..i know your loss of Stephanie cuz songbirds sing and sing....keep up with your writing...let those feelings out...And when we think of Stephanie...we feel that she's about...

Re: Heartloss (User Rating: 1 )
by whitt on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:54:22 PM AEST
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i am speechless with chills
well written i must add
xxsorriesxx

Re: Heartloss (User Rating: 1 )
by hmong_dude on Tuesday, 1st February 2011 @ 04:00:34 AM AEST
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Nice...!!! :)

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