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Array ( [sid] => 163482 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => alone [time] => 2010-11-30 12:39:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What if one day i wake up and see
that the only person left is me?
That everyone else is long since gone
and that every choice i made was wrong
if i never learn to let go and have fun
soon with me everyone else will be done
together always hand in hand
their partnerships drew the line in the sand
alone i will stand at the end
i wish i'd managed to keep a friend
at least im finding that there is something in me
i might be alone but at least i'll be free [comments] => 5 [counter] => 276 [topic] => 43 [informant] => kassi124 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
alone

Contributed by kassi124 on Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 12:39:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



What if one day i wake up and see
that the only person left is me?
That everyone else is long since gone
and that every choice i made was wrong
if i never learn to let go and have fun
soon with me everyone else will be done
together always hand in hand
their partnerships drew the line in the sand
alone i will stand at the end
i wish i'd managed to keep a friend
at least im finding that there is something in me
i might be alone but at least i'll be free




Copyright © kassi124 ... [ 2010-11-30 12:39:00]
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Re: alone (User Rating: 1 )
by TheFireThatFreezes on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 04:59:05 AM AEST
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nice poem , but make sure you capitalize the i's and the first world at the beginning of each sentence.

Otherwise, really good.


Re: alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Nonefound on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 10:59:48 PM AEST
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food for thought. I like this poem.


Re: alone (User Rating: 1 )
by 2bpositive on Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 10:46:50 PM AEST
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nice write. I can really relate
that sadness
only seems to escalate



Re: alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 12:38:45 PM AEST
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great work and geat efforts you put into it.

Takecare
Anbarean


Re: alone (User Rating: 1 )
by whitt on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:49:24 PM AEST
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ah the spelling isnt what makes a poem true to heart..its the meanings , feelings , and thoughts put in it that makes it lovely :) great read thanks !




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