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I think my heart might race ardently
With affection for our duplicates
Each time I saw it.

I'd look upon it so often
That the colours would certainly dull;
What was captured by one lens,
Another two would devour.

Proof of our promixity
That we were in the same frame.
Just for an instant,
Together at least somewhere.

That'd be enough to make blood rush
As my heart tries to measure the contours
Of your face and mine,
Sweetly alongside each other.

I'd trace the details every day,
Holding the memory of your features
Like a miser with infinite wealth,
Being so envious of the one next to you

Forgetting, having looked so many times,
That she is me, because
Reality could never be so kind.
So, can we take a picture together?
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Photography

Contributed by MaryAnson on Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 09:33:33 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If we took a picture together,
I think my heart might race ardently
With affection for our duplicates
Each time I saw it.

I'd look upon it so often
That the colours would certainly dull;
What was captured by one lens,
Another two would devour.

Proof of our promixity
That we were in the same frame.
Just for an instant,
Together at least somewhere.

That'd be enough to make blood rush
As my heart tries to measure the contours
Of your face and mine,
Sweetly alongside each other.

I'd trace the details every day,
Holding the memory of your features
Like a miser with infinite wealth,
Being so envious of the one next to you

Forgetting, having looked so many times,
That she is me, because
Reality could never be so kind.
So, can we take a picture together?

Copyright © MaryAnson ... [ 2010-11-30 09:33:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Photography (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 07:10:39 AM AEST
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strange creapy cool can we take a picture my pretty lol

Re: Photography (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Thursday, 2nd December 2010 @ 02:55:52 AM AEST
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very good i really like this

Re: Photography (User Rating: 1 )
by whitt on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:44:32 PM AEST
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your poem makes me smile of my own memories!!! keep up the writing :)

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