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Killing me
Contributed by
DukeW
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Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 03:43:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Did you enjoy killing me?
Did you enjoy suffocating me?
I enjoyed loving you!
Trying to figure out what to do.
Pick up the peaces of my soul,
Nothing there but a gaping hole.
Did you enjoy breaking me?
I was already dead, didn't you see?
Destroy my world, it's already shattered!
Kill me, my life already ended.
Darkness you, Darkness you will be,
Darkness I am, darkness is me.
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DukeW
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2010-11-28 15:43:42]
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Re: Killing me
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 11:33:15 PM AEST
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I can relate but I got over it
this is a greatly written, raw emotion captured in this touching write.
Awesome.
YOU've opened a new dimension to heart break.
Great write.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Killing me
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by Fern on
Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 01:42:37 PM AEST
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| If I'm interpreting your poem right, it seems that someone you loved very much has devastated you. It appears that this person took some sort of perverse and obscene pleasure in bringing you down. Killing you after you were already dead...those are very powerful words, poet. Not sure I understand what the last 2 lines mean, but overall, this is a well-crafted, although very sad poem to read. I wish you well. I hope to read more of your work. I think you are very good at expressing how you truly feel in a poetic format. Excellent, actually! |
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