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here, in your head
waiting to be thought

curled in your breast
ready to beat,
to beat, to beat

on your lips,
longing to be spoken
ah/me/ma

but unborn, less than
token.

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Progeny

Contributed by spike on Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 02:11:39 AM in AEST
Topic: poets

here, in your head
waiting to be thought

curled in your breast
ready to beat,
to beat, to beat

on your lips,
longing to be spoken
ah/me/ma

but unborn, less than
token.

Copyright © spike ... [ 2010-11-28 02:11:39]
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Re: Progeny (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 06:28:31 AM AEST
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Man, I really enjoyed this. The opening is fantastic with how something so special is a thought buried deep inside that will blossom wildly when that moment of magic arrives. Creative and refreshing. Well done.

duff

Re: Progeny (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 12:12:16 AM AEST
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Awesome.
huggs,
emy

Re: Progeny (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 01:08:47 AM AEST
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interesting, i like it.

Re: Progeny (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 09:54:56 AM AEST
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My favorite line. The end was off for me...:)

'on your lips,
longing to be spoken
ah/me/ma'

ming

Re: Progeny (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 01:43:52 AM AEST
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"but unborn, less than
token..."

I wonder, how many thoughts a day... are aborted. How much we wish to speak... goes unspoken? I like the simplicity, and the thoughts it invokes.

Nazzy ~
(pokin' round the old haunt)

Re: Progeny (User Rating: 1 )
by Room214 on Sunday, 31st July 2011 @ 05:50:21 PM AEST
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You had me with the title really. This... just leaves me aching. I want to say 'I'm sorry' - even, if I don't know exactly why.

Heart-tugging........

214

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