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_____________________________
now would have been five months
you loved me forever once,
guess we will try it your way
leaving upon my heart, ashes like pompeii,
i was so happy loving you
guess it was too good to be true,
so now that we are over
we won't be rolling in the clover,


your kisses made me so hot
lack of them is a garrotte,
so our passionate love is at an end
you want only to call me friend,
my feelings are suspended
while yours are transcended,
for evermore you touched my soul
in my deepest places, not the shoal,


i love you and no other compares
from your sexy feet to your wild hair,
our letters once meant so much to us
yet somewhere after 450 we lost our trust,
it's your way, yes, but to annalize my feelings
with every breath i take, is very unappealing,
i declare, there is no more magic in the air
you wanting only friendship took me unaware.
you'll always hold that last piece of my heart
you have had it with you from our very start:)
§* *§
*|*




do you believe in love at first sight, my friend?

shall i walk by you once again?




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Ashes like Pompeii

Contributed by ladyfawn on Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry









_____________________________
now would have been five months
you loved me forever once,
guess we will try it your way
leaving upon my heart, ashes like pompeii,
i was so happy loving you
guess it was too good to be true,
so now that we are over
we won't be rolling in the clover,


your kisses made me so hot
lack of them is a garrotte,
so our passionate love is at an end
you want only to call me friend,
my feelings are suspended
while yours are transcended,
for evermore you touched my soul
in my deepest places, not the shoal,


i love you and no other compares
from your sexy feet to your wild hair,
our letters once meant so much to us
yet somewhere after 450 we lost our trust,
it's your way, yes, but to annalize my feelings
with every breath i take, is very unappealing,
i declare, there is no more magic in the air
you wanting only friendship took me unaware.
you'll always hold that last piece of my heart
you have had it with you from our very start:)
§* *§
*|*




do you believe in love at first sight, my friend?

shall i walk by you once again?








Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2003-04-21 15:05:00]
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Re: Ashes like Pompeii (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 05:18:27 PM AEST
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best wishes too you.This is beautiful and heartfelt.
Michelle


Re: Ashes like Pompeii (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 05:31:38 PM AEST
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very nice, very cute...how about you walk past again...LOL

Lindsey


Re: Ashes like Pompeii (User Rating: 1 )
by Cierlast on Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 06:29:59 PM AEST
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Very interesting write; the line, "leaving upon my heart, ashes like pompeii" I found most thoughtful. What brought you to the compiling of that line? (How did you get there?) ...........Hmmm, that's a great line! Nice Job!

Cierlast


Re: Ashes like Pompeii (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 07:26:26 PM AEST
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such a beautiful write although sad...
Shari


Re: Ashes like Pompeii (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 11:36:16 PM AEST
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Oh wow, Nessa .... this is such a painful, emotional write .... very well written ... and I just love the last two lines .... perfection .... love and hugs to you ... Jan


Re: Ashes like Pompeii (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 02:39:55 AM AEST
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very passionate writing.. venkat


Re: Ashes like Pompeii (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 05:38:19 PM AEST
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Very painful write, I;m sure, Ness.... Hope the pain eases...
Hugs always,
Jenni


Re: Ashes like Pompeii (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 10:24:03 PM AEST
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I also liked the phrase "leaving upon my heart, ashes like pompeii" ... definately brings vivid images to mind.
Nessa, this is so sad, but so well written.
Big Hugs ~ T


Re: Ashes like Pompeii (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 07:54:10 AM AEST
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beautiful and very sad poem... blessings to you...


Re: Ashes like Pompeii (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 09:20:57 PM AEST
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hmm.. i think it was because i felt like those people at the time of this writing... like frozen in time, ashes upon my heart.... thanks for asking:)
hugs nessa




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