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Forever Pain
Contributed by
whitt
on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 10:45:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A blanket of snow covered the ground.
There was a peaceful serenidity, no sound.
He crept through the open window, and over the mess.
She had a innocent youth that he obsessed.
A sudden chill froze on her lips
Cold hands running up her smooth hips.
She was frightened, too stunned to scream
His identity diguised, hidden by a black seam.
He tore off her clothes, threatening if she resist.
She attempted to run, but felt the knuckles of his fist.
She was pure, her virginity shown,
And in a second it was gone.
Tears trickle down her pink cheek.
Her thighs are bruised, her legs are weak.
Seconds, minutes, hour after hour,
Never did she imagine pleasure so sour.
The sheets were soiled with blood.
The floor was printed with mud.
Satisfied, he lifted off her limp body.
No witness, no accomplist, there was nobody.
He left her with no dignity,
No security, or virginity.
She felt used, left in the dust,
like a bicycle abandoned to rust.
She curled her face into her knees,
Her pride was gone, along with her pleas.
Now her heart, a caged dove.
Broken, was her ability to love.
Copyright ©
whitt
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2010-11-27 22:45:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Forever Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 07:59:56 AM AEST (User
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Strong, and emotional write. A painful read, but done with dignity. Thanks for the read.
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Re: Forever Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rykor on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 12:08:14 PM AEST (User
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Such a sad poem! It is truly terrible these sort of things happen... |
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Re: Forever Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fern on
Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 01:20:17 PM AEST (User
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Whitt, I hope this is pure fiction. If it is not, you have described in chilling detail, via prose poetry, the utter monstrosity of a rape scene. It is such a gruesome, even macabre event you have presented to us with your powerful verse, that it's difficult for me to even comment on. However, the piece is brilliantly written and utterly graphic by anyone's definition. And for that, you deserve loads of credit. A sad story you have penned,, but in terms of pure writing expertise...absolutely riveting! |
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