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Awaken
Contributed by
duff
on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 10:00:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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The sun sees its reflection come off the oceans wave
Like a mirage burning wildly across deserts eternal burden
A world resting its eyes inside the calm of a foreign realm
Fire lit rays illuminate a path for my body to choose a future
Maple dances in a hypnotic sway as it wraps the iris in caramel
I feel cleansed beneath this waterfall of purity but am nervous
For years I trembled in confusion not knowing when it would come
Fear of crossing the intersection alone not knowing the way
Here the landscape appears as my mind paints its chosen desire
In this forest of golden apples and dreams I wander free
Copyright ©
duff
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2010-11-27 22:00:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Awaken
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 11:03:03 PM AEST (User
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Very thought provoking.
Blessings,
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Re: Awaken
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anbarean on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 10:10:35 AM AEST (User
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"For years I trembled in confusion not knowing when it would come"
well duff you know you always take my heart and every time you write it looks like Oh thats me...A good poet is when a person who ever reads feels and say's thats TRUE and That's Me
Take care
Bless You
Anbarean |
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