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A genius trying to shed the blueprint
These front door handshakes stifle
It’s difficult to watch her try so hard
Shy from afar control waivers
Victorian acclaim her effort is valid
Communication breakdown again
She’s already achieved their wishes
Shots call on skin to write tomorrow
Her bad religion boasting jack and beam
The so-called freak invites all to whisper
Embarrass me bright says the brain
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Pause in Perfection

Contributed by duff on Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 05:15:18 PM in AEST
Topic: schoolproblems

From across the room I watch socially
A genius trying to shed the blueprint
These front door handshakes stifle
It’s difficult to watch her try so hard
Shy from afar control waivers
Victorian acclaim her effort is valid
Communication breakdown again
She’s already achieved their wishes
Shots call on skin to write tomorrow
Her bad religion boasting jack and beam
The so-called freak invites all to whisper
Embarrass me bright says the brain

Copyright Â© duff ... [ 2010-11-25 17:15:18]
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Re: Pause in Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 07:04:51 PM AEST
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As always you bring up something differet and nice....words are perfect ....poetry over all is perfect...just love it...
Anbarean

Re: Pause in Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by potentialpoet96 on Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 08:54:18 PM AEST
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nice. i like it.

Re: Pause in Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 03:10:15 AM AEST
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Intresting

Re: Pause in Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 05:00:53 AM AEST
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This is a very interesting piece. Well thought out and brilliantly executed. Fine poetry indeed.

Re: Pause in Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by nikolejones on Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 05:07:44 PM AEST
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Very interesting, well written and deep.

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