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I sift through testimony
Transcripts of love
Can’t erase the verdict

A gig for memory
We couldn’t be saved
Saturday night reflections
Wondering if you’re alright

Our song in store for me
I can’t escape this
Groceries for two
I wait for your return

Alone on that drive to work
Isolation opens me up
Sidewalk couples laugh
A snapshot of what used to be

Please come home
The door is open
I promise you change
I promise I will change

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I Wait For You

Contributed by duff on Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 04:16:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Inside the gold mine
I sift through testimony
Transcripts of love
Can’t erase the verdict

A gig for memory
We couldn’t be saved
Saturday night reflections
Wondering if you’re alright

Our song in store for me
I can’t escape this
Groceries for two
I wait for your return

Alone on that drive to work
Isolation opens me up
Sidewalk couples laugh
A snapshot of what used to be

Please come home
The door is open
I promise you change
I promise I will change

Copyright Â© duff ... [ 2010-11-22 16:16:23]
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Re: I Wait For You (User Rating: 1 )
by nirupam on Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 07:20:43 PM AEST
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Excellent working out of the theme of love...the right kind of language to suggest what lies deep and pulsating...love the closing refrain...

Re: I Wait For You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 10:44:16 PM AEST
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I can relate.
good work full of hope for a return.
Good writing.
Blessings,
emy

Re: I Wait For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 11:08:00 PM AEST
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wow you always write something which touch my heart...
Specialy your last few lines shows how the pain and want the person back in life.....What a feeling you put in words...
Love it

Anbarean

Re: I Wait For You (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 11:59:44 PM AEST
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A painful outpouring of the heart,with the rich declaration of love and the pleading for reconciliation,written in blood x

Re: I Wait For You (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 10:40:03 AM AEST
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Hi Duff
you keep rising the bar ever higher. Your talent is so obvious. This is an inspiring piece, written with truth and much sensitivity. Fine job my friend. Well done.

Re: I Wait For You (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 02:14:00 PM AEST
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"sidewalk couples laugh" isn't that just the most painful thing to see after a breakup. It sure is for me. Almost as bad as seeing the person. Always wondering if they are ok, and feeling alone. You captured it very well.

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