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it's not that i like some one else
i've just been holding on to nothing
i'm happier with out you
but i still love you
nothing will keep us together
and when your gone
and i see you around
i know my heart will break
but it's best for us to part
i don't want to say goodbye
but i feel i should
you are no longer the dominate figure in my dreams
the way you used to be
i don't no what i would do with out you
but i need to find out
i'll never feel your tender kiss again
but i wont be holding on for you
to say you love me the way i love you

BUT remember take my hand and
tellme not to go
only if it's whats in your heart. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 117 [topic] => 32 [informant] => bleedinheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

goodbye??

Contributed by bleedinheart on Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 03:10:32 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

how do i find the words to tell you it's over
it's not that i like some one else
i've just been holding on to nothing
i'm happier with out you
but i still love you
nothing will keep us together
and when your gone
and i see you around
i know my heart will break
but it's best for us to part
i don't want to say goodbye
but i feel i should
you are no longer the dominate figure in my dreams
the way you used to be
i don't no what i would do with out you
but i need to find out
i'll never feel your tender kiss again
but i wont be holding on for you
to say you love me the way i love you

BUT remember take my hand and
tellme not to go
only if it's whats in your heart.

Copyright © bleedinheart ... [ 2010-11-22 15:10:32]
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Re: goodbye?? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 05:41:41 AM AEST
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BUT remember take my hand and
tellme not to go
only if it's whats in your heart.

Great writing but the above is my favorite part.
blessings,
emy

Re: goodbye?? (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 10:11:38 AM AEST
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A heartfelt explanation of what one needs and it might not be exactly what the other person believes is true. So many can't believe that a person isn't seeing another person just because they aren't seeing you. Using space and time to figure out what's best. Awesome write!

duff

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