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Array ( [sid] => 163377 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BLANK [time] => 2010-11-22 12:50:17 [hometext] => Its my first time writing a poem i just wanted to let my feelings be known to the unknown. [bodytext] => My Love was strong but not strong enough to hold the pain.
You laughed and lied, cheated, and cried 'cause you got caught in your game.
But you still havn't felt my pain.
Now im bitter taken my anger out on every other man.
You stupid fool i was your biggest fan.
I took you back more then twice.
But the more i did you acted colder then ice.
So finally i started to not give a ****.
Going out with my girls talking to any niggas i want.
Why are you blowing up my phone.
Please (******) LEAVE ME ALONE!
Its time for me to act just like you
I laughed and lied, cheated, and sometimes cried.
Reapting the same script every night.
But after a while it dragged me down, Feeling *****tier then ever making my self look like a clown.
What am i doing i love this a**, I left him for a complete stranger.
And now im in the bottom sitting solo, low class.
But i know in my heart, what we had wouldn't last.
So just leave it behind it all happened for the best. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 61 [informant] => nini [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

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Contributed by nini on Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 12:50:17 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

My Love was strong but not strong enough to hold the pain.
You laughed and lied, cheated, and cried 'cause you got caught in your game.
But you still havn't felt my pain.
Now im bitter taken my anger out on every other man.
You stupid fool i was your biggest fan.
I took you back more then twice.
But the more i did you acted colder then ice.
So finally i started to not give a ****.
Going out with my girls talking to any niggas i want.
Why are you blowing up my phone.
Please (******) LEAVE ME ALONE!
Its time for me to act just like you
I laughed and lied, cheated, and sometimes cried.
Reapting the same script every night.
But after a while it dragged me down, Feeling *****tier then ever making my self look like a clown.
What am i doing i love this a**, I left him for a complete stranger.
And now im in the bottom sitting solo, low class.
But i know in my heart, what we had wouldn't last.
So just leave it behind it all happened for the best.

Copyright © nini ... [ 2010-11-22 12:50:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: BLANK (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 01:00:37 PM AEST
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Certainly an interesting life you lead. Great choice to dump the guy cheating on you, but playing his game too is not what you should do. Come on, you can do better than that!
Welcome aboard, nice start.
Take care, Chris.

Re: BLANK (User Rating: 1 )
by jonquilcottage on Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 03:13:07 PM AEST
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been in this position too and wrote about it (can read it if you want) but dont lower yourself to their level. If you like writiing it down in poetry it is a good way of getting it out of your system. Better off without people like that trust me I know. Good luck with the writing I liked it x

Re: BLANK (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 12:21:22 AM AEST
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It's interesting. With respect, I find it kind of typical. However, at the end, when you breach the veil of your M.O. and give us your own voice...

Well, let's just say you have a lot of potential, you just need to draw deeper and use that depth to describe in better clarity what is on the surface of your life.

always, abraham

Re: BLANK (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 01:03:33 PM AEST
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For a first time poem you did well... I can tell there is emotion in this one that surfaced through the words. Nice start and keep it going.

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