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Array ( [sid] => 163324 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I wrote.... [time] => 2010-11-19 10:11:30 [hometext] => the rest of the I wrote... poem.....its the whole thing [bodytext] => I wrote my name in the clouds,

But the wind blew it away.

I wrote your name in the sand,

But the water washed it away.

I wrote your name in my heart,

And forever it will stay.

Until the day came,

And you ripped it away.



That day went not so good,

I wanted it to end.

You broke my heart,

But I’m the one to blame……

Afraid that I was going to lose you,

But that came true.

I don’t want you to leave,

But you wanted to…



I tell you I love you,

I tell you I need you,

But I guess that’s not good enough for you……

You say I love you too,

You say you need me too.

But if so,

Then why are we where we are at now?



My heart is trying to heal,

But it can’t on its own,

Because I need you to fix it.

I said I’m sorry,

So many times before,

And I don’t think you know what to say…



I miss your gentle touch,

And your soft kiss,

Your smile can make me smile.

And your voice is so soothing,

Not hearing it makes me go crazy.

Wanting to tell you,

I want you back,

But afraid of what you will say.



Just you all together,

There is no line of words….

That can explain how I feel about you.

Sometimes the moments feel right,

And want them to last forever.



The way I look at you has changed…

You broke my heart once

Then you did it again….

I can’t trust certain people now….

Because of you…..



You blame me for what has happened to us….

But I don’t see why it is my fault….

You blame me but I blame you…



I hear many things from so many different people….

I don’t know if they are true, or not…

I don’t hear the truth from people anymore…

All because you took my trust and lied to me….



Not wanting you to leave,

But I’m moving on but very slowly….

I have to hide the fact that I love you

From so many different people…

But I can’t handle not telling you.



People think we are still together

And I think it’s funny

But when they ask

“Are you to going out??”

It hurts to reply we are just friends…



I can’t believe where we are at now…

Just as friends…

It kills the inside of me.

I just have no way to say

That I need to be with you babe…





People get on my nerve almost every day…

Because they heard…

We aren’t what we were…

But I don’t care

Because I still love you the same…

Even though you were in the wrong.



I look at you different…

But I love you the same

Sadly but true…

And I can’t be without you….



People say I shouldn’t

Move backwards in time

Because you were the past…

They want to me to move forward



But they don’t know what we had….

And what we want

I hate when people say

“Move on past her….”

It drives me crazy….
Because I’m hooked on you.



Wanting to tell

How I feel….

But finding it hard to breathe

Around you….

You take my breath away when I’m around you…

You sweep me right off my feet.



My heart skips a beat….

When I feel you against me….

When you’re in my arms…

I want to hold you much longer.



The thing that drives me crazy

The most it that you tease me…

You act like we are going to kiss…

But then you start to walk away….

One day I’m just going to grab you

And kiss you…just to see what would happen…

Would you kiss back?

Is the question that popped in my head

Or would you push me away?

And tell me to go away?



Well finding someone who likes me

I thought would be hard to find…..

But I guess I was wrong…

Not knowing what to do…

Because I want to be with you…



If I needed you…

I hope you would be there for me…

But I don’t know if you would…..
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I wrote....

Contributed by girlbballjunky101 on Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 10:11:30 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I wrote my name in the clouds,

But the wind blew it away.

I wrote your name in the sand,

But the water washed it away.

I wrote your name in my heart,

And forever it will stay.

Until the day came,

And you ripped it away.



That day went not so good,

I wanted it to end.

You broke my heart,

But I’m the one to blame……

Afraid that I was going to lose you,

But that came true.

I don’t want you to leave,

But you wanted to…



I tell you I love you,

I tell you I need you,

But I guess that’s not good enough for you……

You say I love you too,

You say you need me too.

But if so,

Then why are we where we are at now?



My heart is trying to heal,

But it can’t on its own,

Because I need you to fix it.

I said I’m sorry,

So many times before,

And I don’t think you know what to say…



I miss your gentle touch,

And your soft kiss,

Your smile can make me smile.

And your voice is so soothing,

Not hearing it makes me go crazy.

Wanting to tell you,

I want you back,

But afraid of what you will say.



Just you all together,

There is no line of words….

That can explain how I feel about you.

Sometimes the moments feel right,

And want them to last forever.



The way I look at you has changed…

You broke my heart once

Then you did it again….

I can’t trust certain people now….

Because of you…..



You blame me for what has happened to us….

But I don’t see why it is my fault….

You blame me but I blame you…



I hear many things from so many different people….

I don’t know if they are true, or not…

I don’t hear the truth from people anymore…

All because you took my trust and lied to me….



Not wanting you to leave,

But I’m moving on but very slowly….

I have to hide the fact that I love you

From so many different people…

But I can’t handle not telling you.



People think we are still together

And I think it’s funny

But when they ask

“Are you to going out??”

It hurts to reply we are just friends…



I can’t believe where we are at now…

Just as friends…

It kills the inside of me.

I just have no way to say

That I need to be with you babe…





People get on my nerve almost every day…

Because they heard…

We aren’t what we were…

But I don’t care

Because I still love you the same…

Even though you were in the wrong.



I look at you different…

But I love you the same

Sadly but true…

And I can’t be without you….



People say I shouldn’t

Move backwards in time

Because you were the past…

They want to me to move forward



But they don’t know what we had….

And what we want

I hate when people say

“Move on past her….”

It drives me crazy….
Because I’m hooked on you.



Wanting to tell

How I feel….

But finding it hard to breathe

Around you….

You take my breath away when I’m around you…

You sweep me right off my feet.



My heart skips a beat….

When I feel you against me….

When you’re in my arms…

I want to hold you much longer.



The thing that drives me crazy

The most it that you tease me…

You act like we are going to kiss…

But then you start to walk away….

One day I’m just going to grab you

And kiss you…just to see what would happen…

Would you kiss back?

Is the question that popped in my head

Or would you push me away?

And tell me to go away?



Well finding someone who likes me

I thought would be hard to find…..

But I guess I was wrong…

Not knowing what to do…

Because I want to be with you…



If I needed you…

I hope you would be there for me…

But I don’t know if you would…..




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i wrote a shorter poem lol i liked it though




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