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Pain is when you are the opposite of good.
But worse than bad. You're in pain.
Pain causes more pain which leaves you there crying.
Griefing over yourself.
Nobody deserves that.
Everyone deserves support.
If a person does not have support, that person is hollow.
And a hollow person is a victim.
A victim of what you might ask.
That person is a victim of
pain.

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Pain.

Contributed by Marqz on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 07:23:49 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Pain. What is pain?
Pain is when you are the opposite of good.
But worse than bad. You're in pain.
Pain causes more pain which leaves you there crying.
Griefing over yourself.
Nobody deserves that.
Everyone deserves support.
If a person does not have support, that person is hollow.
And a hollow person is a victim.
A victim of what you might ask.
That person is a victim of
pain.

Copyright © Marqz ... [ 2010-11-17 07:23:49]
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Re: Pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 07:37:48 AM AEST
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Nice write love the way you used the words you do have a gift just keep using that gift.

Re: Pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:43:48 PM AEST
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for your first piece this is great! I enjoyed reading it. keep up the great work!

Welcome to y.p.d.c! thanks for posting

Re: Pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 02:12:18 PM AEST
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Welcome and thanks for sharing this piece. I agree that a person should never have to stand alone in troubling times and how important open ears are to keeping a balance of emotions. Well done.

duff

Re: Pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by potentialpoet96 on Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 10:10:27 AM AEST
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kind of depresssing.. i love it!

Re: Pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnnyFallen on Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 07:32:46 PM AEST
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To me, a person who is hollow is someone who ripped out their hearts for someone they love and then it gets broken and they can't fix it and put it back in.

Re: Pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by kleetas on Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 03:24:05 AM AEST
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pain is a threshold devouring good taste learn ye more speeling and keep up the pace....

Re: Pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 02:10:48 AM AEST
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a victim of pain and possibly a victim of depression lol loneliness is a sad affair. You know what they say tho, no pain no gain. You have to be lonely at least once to appreciate friendship and loyalty.

Re: Pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 11:18:22 PM AEST
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you define pain very nicely and in a very different way. I enjoyed it though its pain but still i love your write.
Take care
Anbarean

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