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beauty is silenced, it doesnt show like the outer skin
time heals all, pain cant last forever
its the first sunshine, after the stormiest weather
things get better, when some are still worse
its good to be alive, even though sometimes i still hurt
passion writing, makes a good writer
hard work and practice, makes you a good fighter
never give up, when your goals are set high
just think of the clouds, thats deep within the sky
believe in yourself, even if all hope is lost
but always remember this, making to the top always cost [comments] => 4 [counter] => 119 [topic] => 43 [informant] => romeseductive [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

World of a writer

Contributed by romeseductive on Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 11:27:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

my worl is different, afection dwells deep within
beauty is silenced, it doesnt show like the outer skin
time heals all, pain cant last forever
its the first sunshine, after the stormiest weather
things get better, when some are still worse
its good to be alive, even though sometimes i still hurt
passion writing, makes a good writer
hard work and practice, makes you a good fighter
never give up, when your goals are set high
just think of the clouds, thats deep within the sky
believe in yourself, even if all hope is lost
but always remember this, making to the top always cost

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Re: World of a writer (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 11:34:18 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.

Good work.
blessings,
emy

Re: World of a writer (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 11:41:19 PM AEST
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i like it to and wouldnt say that its weak, you captured alot of feelings in this that i think many of the writers on this site will be able to relate to one way or another. good job!

and welcome to the site! keep on posting

Re: World of a writer (User Rating: 1 )
by kleetas on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 12:54:59 AM AEST
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i see the likeable spinning of a tale with a good punch at the end...always a cost...always costs

Re: World of a writer (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 02:40:35 PM AEST
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i would say this is a pretty strong poem actually, despite some easily fixed grammar errors.

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