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Array ( [sid] => 163212 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => EVERYTIME I HOLD YOU [time] => 2010-11-13 02:45:43 [hometext] => My 100th poem is all about love. [bodytext] => Everyday I look in your eyes
I see a trust that never dies
A strength of love I can't disguise
Everytime I hold you

There's a feeling in my soul
That tells me I cannot let go
You are what makes me whole
Everytime I hold you

And there's not a day that I believe
That all this is so true
Then I reach out and touch your hand
And I know that it is you

It's the gentleness of your face
And the beauty of your grace
I feel the warmth of your embrace
Everytime I hold you

There's not a day that disappears
When I don't think of you, my dear
I say 'I love you' in your ear
Everytime I hold you...

I thank God that you are here
Everytime I hold you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 2 [informant] => chrisdavid [notes] => Title changed per site help ~ Moderator_18 Nov 13, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

EVERYTIME I HOLD YOU

Contributed by chrisdavid on Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 02:45:43 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Everyday I look in your eyes
I see a trust that never dies
A strength of love I can't disguise
Everytime I hold you

There's a feeling in my soul
That tells me I cannot let go
You are what makes me whole
Everytime I hold you

And there's not a day that I believe
That all this is so true
Then I reach out and touch your hand
And I know that it is you

It's the gentleness of your face
And the beauty of your grace
I feel the warmth of your embrace
Everytime I hold you

There's not a day that disappears
When I don't think of you, my dear
I say 'I love you' in your ear
Everytime I hold you...

I thank God that you are here
Everytime I hold you

Copyright © chrisdavid ... [ 2010-11-13 02:45:43]
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Re: EVERYTIME I HOLD YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by ammar on Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 08:30:13 AM AEST
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Congratulations for writing your hundredth poem.

I like this poem for its varying rhyme scheme and, of course, for the deep sentiment it carries.
I find the third quatrain to be the most beautiful, though the omission of 'that' in the last line would make the flow smoother and even more natural.

Keep writing
Peace
Ammar

Re: EVERYTIME I HOLD YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by bleedinheart on Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 10:46:24 AM AEST
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beautiful write rhyming
but would sound better with everytime THAT i hold you but good work

Re: EVERYTIME I HOLD YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by JAlexandra on Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 11:51:08 PM AEST
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Love can definitely make you feel this way. Enjoyed your poem.

Re: EVERYTIME I HOLD YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 07:51:48 AM AEST
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what a lucky woman! a deeply heartfelt write that would warm any winter's day with its warmth of expression and devotion

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