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Array ( [sid] => 163190 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Where I really long to be... [time] => 2010-11-11 19:40:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I just want to be needed
I wish you’d help me off the ground
I wish I knew you noticed
When I wasn’t around…
I wish I made a difference
I wish I had a reason to be
I wish we shared the same view
But you will never see…
I need you so
I need you though,
You don’t need me
And this I know…
But I don’t care
I can’t help stare
You’re all I see
When you aren't there
The way you shine
But you're not mine
I wish you were…
Cause you’re so fine
Although your not
You’re what is sought
A harder lesson
Has never been taught…
And so I must go on
And leave things as they are
But I will not stray
I'll never be to far
Just know if you need me
If you need somebody there
Just call out to me…
So I can show how much I care
I’ll be there for anything
No matter what the size
Small or large I’ll stand tall
Together we won’t be surprised
I’ll be a pillar when you’re weak
If you can’t stand up on your own
If you have no one to call yours
I’ll be where you call home
Just look right behind you
And it’s me that you will see
But know that by your side
Is where I really long to be… [comments] => 9 [counter] => 456 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Where I really long to be...

Contributed by holderofthestone on Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 07:40:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I just want to be needed
I wish you’d help me off the ground
I wish I knew you noticed
When I wasn’t around…
I wish I made a difference
I wish I had a reason to be
I wish we shared the same view
But you will never see…
I need you so
I need you though,
You don’t need me
And this I know…
But I don’t care
I can’t help stare
You’re all I see
When you aren't there
The way you shine
But you're not mine
I wish you were…
Cause you’re so fine
Although your not
You’re what is sought
A harder lesson
Has never been taught…
And so I must go on
And leave things as they are
But I will not stray
I'll never be to far
Just know if you need me
If you need somebody there
Just call out to me…
So I can show how much I care
I’ll be there for anything
No matter what the size
Small or large I’ll stand tall
Together we won’t be surprised
I’ll be a pillar when you’re weak
If you can’t stand up on your own
If you have no one to call yours
I’ll be where you call home
Just look right behind you
And it’s me that you will see
But know that by your side
Is where I really long to be…




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Re: Where I really long to be... (User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 07:54:15 PM AEST
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This is a very beautiful bittersweet poem!! The longing and dedication is expressed beautifully!! Great job!


Re: Where I really long to be... (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 08:49:56 PM AEST
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It is often those we do not see, that have the most love for us. We tend to focus our attentions on the things we cannot have, when our true happiness is slapping us in the back of the head (sometimes literally)

keep writing
always, abraham


Re: Where I really long to be... (User Rating: 1 )
by petulinka on Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 03:13:02 PM AEST
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nice one!


Re: Where I really long to be... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 04:21:04 PM AEST
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Awesome friend.
I think we all feel this way from time to time.
It would really be nice to know someone was this dedicated to me.
huggs, blessings,
emy


Re: Where I really long to be... (User Rating: 1 )
by brialuv on Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 06:29:49 PM AEST
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i loveee it!...the flow and choice of words is just brilliant thanks for sharing i especially love the line
-I'll be a pillar when your weak
If you cant stand up on your own


Re: Where I really long to be... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 09:34:51 PM AEST
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Touching and moving write, I felt this one start to finish.

Michelle


Re: Where I really long to be... (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:42:00 PM AEST
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Wow really nice you have a great gift from God always use that I know you real nice write.


Re: Where I really long to be... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 12:41:43 AM AEST
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I can relate to a lot of this. At least you're not giving up. I myself feel like I am. I am wondering if it's worth the heart ache.

Nicely done...oh, and Abraham, if you see this, I wish you could talk some sense into my friend. lol.

Thanks,

Tim


Re: Where I really long to be... (User Rating: 1 )
by potentialpoet96 on Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 10:20:58 AM AEST
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wow.
i loved it.
keep writting,




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