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Array ( [sid] => 163141 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Colorless Eyes [time] => 2010-11-09 19:28:29 [hometext] => playing ^_^ always, abraham [bodytext] => Colorless eyes
Fold sky
Adore the promises
Of moonlight
Opening the door
At dismal hour
With dismal thought

To love
Left to conclaves
Of roses
Lilies
Wroth with envy

Hands burdened
With dreams and
Ideals
Too naïve
To be true

Spoken at the brink
Of tears
Thoughts of horses
Running wild
At the memory
Of earlier tears
Yellow in distant
Fields
Blood and stars

Opening at the moonlight
Promises of sky
Fingers dance with orchids
Dance the thoughts
Of love
Away


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Colorless Eyes

Contributed by iodinelove on Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 07:28:29 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal



Colorless eyes
Fold sky
Adore the promises
Of moonlight
Opening the door
At dismal hour
With dismal thought

To love
Left to conclaves
Of roses
Lilies
Wroth with envy

Hands burdened
With dreams and
Ideals
Too naïve
To be true

Spoken at the brink
Of tears
Thoughts of horses
Running wild
At the memory
Of earlier tears
Yellow in distant
Fields
Blood and stars

Opening at the moonlight
Promises of sky
Fingers dance with orchids
Dance the thoughts
Of love
Away






Copyright © iodinelove ... [ 2010-11-09 19:28:29]
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Re: Colorless Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 10:49:35 PM AEST
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What a beautiful piece of writing. Your imagery is stunning and captivates. There are some great lines here.

Opening at the moonlight
Promises of sky

Awesome line!

duff


Re: Colorless Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 11:41:42 PM AEST
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Hi there Abe,
It's always a delight to see something new from you.
Very creative write.
big huggs, smiles,blessings,
emy


Re: Colorless Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 01:56:49 AM AEST
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Oh my! what a truly captivating piece of poetry.
Full of atmosphere and highly descriptive. I love this one. Thanks for sharing.


Re: Colorless Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Meddy45 on Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 05:41:59 AM AEST
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Great poem I really enjoyed it


Re: Colorless Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by petulinka on Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 04:13:55 PM AEST
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nice like it a lot!


Re: Colorless Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 09:16:10 AM AEST
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When you play you open the door. :) And this line speaks volumes!



'Hands burdened
With dreams and
Ideals
Too naïve
To be true'


ming


Re: Colorless Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 08:44:20 AM AEST
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Wow like this write liked the way you used the words the write came out just right nice really nice keep writing.


Re: Colorless Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Smithery on Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 08:30:54 AM AEST
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life is my canvas, pain is my brush, love is my colour, you are my light.

Thanks for sharing, a beautiful poem




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