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Array ( [sid] => 163110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Innocence Taken Young [time] => 2010-11-08 13:00:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Innocence taken young, the feelings known by many
No choice in the matter she had to be ready
Touched as a baby by a boy but looking back how can he
Not know that his mark left her worthless as a penny

Lying on the ground with copper face facing the sky
Seeing the bottoms of shoes pass by, wanting to die
Getting stuck in their gum looks better than these lonely cries
But she learns that nobody can take away the pain inside

"Whats happened to my baby," mama cries at night
"Shes just six years old and she no longer holds me tight.
Ill give my life to save her, fix her, make it right.
But rage keeps her caged from my loves light."

This girls too young to know shes angry feeling like a whore
She cant explain the word but she knows dirtys at her core
Greed and lust killed innocence, slammed the door
And woke her violently, making dress-up relevant no more. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 39 [informant] => cheshire [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Innocence Taken Young

Contributed by cheshire on Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 01:00:11 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Innocence taken young, the feelings known by many
No choice in the matter she had to be ready
Touched as a baby by a boy but looking back how can he
Not know that his mark left her worthless as a penny

Lying on the ground with copper face facing the sky
Seeing the bottoms of shoes pass by, wanting to die
Getting stuck in their gum looks better than these lonely cries
But she learns that nobody can take away the pain inside

"Whats happened to my baby," mama cries at night
"Shes just six years old and she no longer holds me tight.
Ill give my life to save her, fix her, make it right.
But rage keeps her caged from my loves light."

This girls too young to know shes angry feeling like a whore
She cant explain the word but she knows dirtys at her core
Greed and lust killed innocence, slammed the door
And woke her violently, making dress-up relevant no more.

Copyright © cheshire ... [ 2010-11-08 13:00:11]
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Re: Innocence Taken Young (User Rating: 1 )
by bleedinheart on Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 08:41:17 AM AEST
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many children goes through this and no1 feels their pain

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