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Array ( [sid] => 163091 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stranger [time] => 2010-11-07 20:16:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You're just a stranger
I know you no longer
I look at pictures and I see
Just a stranger staring back at me
I try and listen for your voice
I only hear noise
I close my eyes and remember your touch
But all I feel is coldness

Who are you?
You aren't the boy I once knew
A alien in your place
You have the same hazel eyes
That crooked smile is no different
The cold look in your eyes is what I see
That smile was never meant for me
Where have you gone?

I can't remember the sweet things you used to say
I only hear the spiteful words on replay
I can't remember when you were near
I can only feel the tears.
The feeling of hope is gone
I only feel wronged
What have I done?

Do you remember me?
The girl that used to brighten your day
The girl you talked hours with every night
The girl whose first kiss you stole
The girl who gave you her heart and soul
Do you even care?

All these questions swimming through my mind
How our hands intertwined
so perfectly, as if meant to be
You pulled away, breaking my heart
You walked away when things got tough

You were clueless to the obvious
You never saw the hurt on my face
The tears pooling in my eyes
Would it have made a difference?
Would you have kept your promise?
Maybe you would have loved me like I loved you...<'3 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 138 [topic] => 22 [informant] => MisunderstoodBlonde182 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Stranger

Contributed by MisunderstoodBlonde182 on Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 08:16:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You're just a stranger
I know you no longer
I look at pictures and I see
Just a stranger staring back at me
I try and listen for your voice
I only hear noise
I close my eyes and remember your touch
But all I feel is coldness

Who are you?
You aren't the boy I once knew
A alien in your place
You have the same hazel eyes
That crooked smile is no different
The cold look in your eyes is what I see
That smile was never meant for me
Where have you gone?

I can't remember the sweet things you used to say
I only hear the spiteful words on replay
I can't remember when you were near
I can only feel the tears.
The feeling of hope is gone
I only feel wronged
What have I done?

Do you remember me?
The girl that used to brighten your day
The girl you talked hours with every night
The girl whose first kiss you stole
The girl who gave you her heart and soul
Do you even care?

All these questions swimming through my mind
How our hands intertwined
so perfectly, as if meant to be
You pulled away, breaking my heart
You walked away when things got tough

You were clueless to the obvious
You never saw the hurt on my face
The tears pooling in my eyes
Would it have made a difference?
Would you have kept your promise?
Maybe you would have loved me like I loved you...<'3




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Re: Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 12:38:15 AM AEST
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I am truly sorry this has not worked for you. His feelings were obviously not as strong as yours in the end. I am thinking you're not that old so hopefully having recovered from this, you can eventually move forward and find someone else. A terrific first write!!
Take care, Chris.


Re: Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by petulinka on Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 04:12:03 PM AEST
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know the feeling,,who doesnt right?..well, you´ll get through it thou it might cost you life riight?..well, good work anyways


Re: Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 02:36:08 PM AEST
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I could share your hurt and pain while I read this poem. Very descriptive and had a nice flow to it. I can tell you really felt all those words you have so artfully expressed.




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