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Array ( [sid] => 163079 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Metaphor [time] => 2010-11-07 04:23:36 [hometext] => Let the truth be told.....Kane [bodytext] => You call me twisted, then ask for forgiveness,
I relish the flavor of red rum, spell it backwards and you'll know the outcome,
Fine red mist, your head splits from the impact of the 30 odd 6,
The star of David, circle it and worship Satan,

To some I'm a Rellik, spell it backwards and you'll see it,
Another life lost, Christ hangs upon an upside down cross,
Cryptic words and hidden messages, pay attention life is precious,
Three pm is the hour of the demon, 12 hours later Jesus had risen,

Like the "Son of Sam," I take orders from a dog,
Spell it backwards and you'll see through the fog,
The orders are clear, infect the world with God's fear,
Church every Sunday, hoping to be righteous by Judgement day,

Like the 10:00 news; I'm live, spell it backwards and prepare to die,
Evil lives within every soul, but most are strong enough to never let it show,
Like Charles Manson, the government is practicing mind control,
Like a flock of sheep we follow, rules and regulations in fear of tomorrow,

Charged with manslaughter, break it down, can you hear this mans-laughter,
To a wounded soul, love can heal, but to a twisted mind love is evol,
If you do not know your past, you are doomed to repeat,
The only people that have seen the end of corruption, are those that are 6' deep.

Heart & Soul
Kane [comments] => 4 [counter] => 432 [topic] => 59 [informant] => kane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
Metaphor

Contributed by kane on Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 04:23:36 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



You call me twisted, then ask for forgiveness,
I relish the flavor of red rum, spell it backwards and you'll know the outcome,
Fine red mist, your head splits from the impact of the 30 odd 6,
The star of David, circle it and worship Satan,

To some I'm a Rellik, spell it backwards and you'll see it,
Another life lost, Christ hangs upon an upside down cross,
Cryptic words and hidden messages, pay attention life is precious,
Three pm is the hour of the demon, 12 hours later Jesus had risen,

Like the "Son of Sam," I take orders from a dog,
Spell it backwards and you'll see through the fog,
The orders are clear, infect the world with God's fear,
Church every Sunday, hoping to be righteous by Judgement day,

Like the 10:00 news; I'm live, spell it backwards and prepare to die,
Evil lives within every soul, but most are strong enough to never let it show,
Like Charles Manson, the government is practicing mind control,
Like a flock of sheep we follow, rules and regulations in fear of tomorrow,

Charged with manslaughter, break it down, can you hear this mans-laughter,
To a wounded soul, love can heal, but to a twisted mind love is evol,
If you do not know your past, you are doomed to repeat,
The only people that have seen the end of corruption, are those that are 6' deep.

Heart & Soul
Kane




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Re: Metaphor (User Rating: 1 )
by ek_da_poet on Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 03:03:23 PM AEST
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amazing and very creative writing my friend. i love the wordplays in this piece, very dark.


Re: Metaphor (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 04:47:24 PM AEST
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Very sad but incredibly written.
Amazing.
blessings, huggs,
I'm sure there's a better way to explain this but it left me speechless.


Re: Metaphor (User Rating: 1 )
by sachyboy on Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 05:50:49 PM AEST
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Amazing. Brilliantly dark and intelligent poem.


Re: Metaphor (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Monday, 28th August 2017 @ 03:10:52 PM AEST
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Kane so very able you are , tongue twisted talent you are long n tall in telling tales , talented beyond beleif , to kill you must be able too ? Kane was sure envious , reminds me of god n Satan , don/'/t you think ? Xx really good poetry your writes are enticing and strong x




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