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Array ( [sid] => 163074 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Torcher [time] => 2010-11-06 18:57:16 [hometext] => Well i wrote this a while back about someone i thought i loved... [bodytext] => He's the one that I want to come home to and just talk to.
He's the one whose sent will pop up at random moments when he's not with me
and make me dreadfully miss him
He's the one whose every hug i can remember
He's the one who can cheer up my day with the simplest look and smile
But he's the one i'm forced to hate
He's the one i have to lock up my feelings for like a murderers jail key
He's the one who i cant be caught dead with
He's the one i'm risking what my life is right now
And he's the one who will ruin everything but our love. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 123 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Breannasaurus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Torcher

Contributed by Breannasaurus on Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 06:57:16 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

He's the one that I want to come home to and just talk to.
He's the one whose sent will pop up at random moments when he's not with me
and make me dreadfully miss him
He's the one whose every hug i can remember
He's the one who can cheer up my day with the simplest look and smile
But he's the one i'm forced to hate
He's the one i have to lock up my feelings for like a murderers jail key
He's the one who i cant be caught dead with
He's the one i'm risking what my life is right now
And he's the one who will ruin everything but our love.

Copyright © Breannasaurus ... [ 2010-11-06 18:57:16]
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Re: Torcher (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 06:10:49 AM AEST
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It was interesting how this piece was torn down the middle with the feelings of this certain person. Very lighthearted and then all of a sudden you can see the hate move in which flipped the poem on its head which made for a nice read.. Well done.

duff

Re: Torcher (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 03:47:58 PM AEST
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yes it seems like a personal struggle. you wrote it well. good poem

Re: Torcher (User Rating: 1 )
by Breannasaurus on Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 09:16:22 PM AEST
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Thank you:)

Re: Torcher (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 05:04:46 PM AEST
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It sounds to me that you chose virtue over love. That is a very hard thing to do and if you did, I very much respect that.

And you are right, it will ruin everything besides your love.

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