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The Fog
Contributed by
tfspirit
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Thursday, 4th November 2010 @ 07:55:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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who has the vision
to see over the mountain
to see past the fireworks
to see past the flowers
who sees the valley
the vast plane
who sees the cliff
before you're already falling?
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tfspirit
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2010-11-04 19:55:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Fog
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 4th November 2010 @ 09:01:27 PM AEST (User
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You have a very unique voice,
Good work.
Blessings,
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Re: The Fog
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 11:50:13 AM AEST (User
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Short but potent in the lines. Great vision and I like the style of your writing.
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