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What do you have to say?

What could you possibly want from me

After you have torn my heart into pieces

And even though it has been mended

After all these years

There are still peices missing

At one time there wasnt a time I could stop smiling when I saw you

Now my facial expression is far from a smile at the sight of you

I thought I held a special place in your heart

But, silly me what was I thinking

How easily I was fooled by the transformation you made into this person I never met

Do you have anything to say for yourself?

Do I even get a sorry?

Or is that to much to ask for

You were a disappointment like a person working hard on a job and still not getting a raise

I hope you have learned from me and changed your ways

So for your benefit; for the next woman you could become a better man [comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 31 [informant] => brialuv [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

A Blast From The Past

Contributed by brialuv on Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 05:14:15 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Your back so suddenly

What do you have to say?

What could you possibly want from me

After you have torn my heart into pieces

And even though it has been mended

After all these years

There are still peices missing

At one time there wasnt a time I could stop smiling when I saw you

Now my facial expression is far from a smile at the sight of you

I thought I held a special place in your heart

But, silly me what was I thinking

How easily I was fooled by the transformation you made into this person I never met

Do you have anything to say for yourself?

Do I even get a sorry?

Or is that to much to ask for

You were a disappointment like a person working hard on a job and still not getting a raise

I hope you have learned from me and changed your ways

So for your benefit; for the next woman you could become a better man

Copyright © brialuv ... [ 2010-10-31 17:14:15]
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Re: A Blast From The Past (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 12:30:52 PM AEST
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aaww wow what a depth to this poem is.
I like the last line.
Very nice
take care

Anbarean

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