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Array ( [sid] => 162991 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => happy birthday you jerk [time] => 2010-10-30 04:29:25 [hometext] => My boyfriend wants a poem for his birthday and this is one of my attempts... is it good/bad? any suggestions/edits? [bodytext] => Sugary sweet scent
star lit eyes
writing this poem may be my demise
your hand grips my hair
your mouth steals my lips
i love the feeling of your hands on my hips
i stifle as gasp as your lips meet my throat
your moan lets me know we're in the same boat
because your skin on mine is oh so divine

Luscios dark hair
clothes off we take
our bodies together will tremble and shake
your hands steady my hips
your mouth soft as sin
i hope your prepared, we're about to begin
increasingly urgent our skin is on fire
as we reach a moment that we each desire
because your skin on mine is oh so divine [comments] => 4 [counter] => 348 [topic] => 10 [informant] => kassi124 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => BirthdayPoems )

happy birthday you jerk

Contributed by kassi124 on Saturday, 30th October 2010 @ 04:29:25 AM in AEST
Topic: BirthdayPoems

Sugary sweet scent
star lit eyes
writing this poem may be my demise
your hand grips my hair
your mouth steals my lips
i love the feeling of your hands on my hips
i stifle as gasp as your lips meet my throat
your moan lets me know we're in the same boat
because your skin on mine is oh so divine

Luscios dark hair
clothes off we take
our bodies together will tremble and shake
your hands steady my hips
your mouth soft as sin
i hope your prepared, we're about to begin
increasingly urgent our skin is on fire
as we reach a moment that we each desire
because your skin on mine is oh so divine

Copyright © kassi124 ... [ 2010-10-30 04:29:25]
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Re: happy birthday you jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by nrazak1 on Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 03:54:11 PM AEST
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Oh my!
That was very good!.
It was soo passionate! Keep up the good work. :)

Re: happy birthday you jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Monday, 1st November 2010 @ 09:29:28 PM AEST
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A sensual write with playful teasing. Raw and seductive. Well done.

duff

Re: happy birthday you jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 05:47:27 PM AEST
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Wow very provocative and sexy,good write.

Re: happy birthday you jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by DIOGENES on Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 01:58:33 PM AEST
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"Luscious dark hair. We take off our clothes." & "Firm hands on my hips;"
Very good write. Thank you.

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