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Array ( [sid] => 162974 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => loves first sight [time] => 2010-10-29 00:28:22 [hometext] => for this is my greatest memory of our relationship the begining of it all [bodytext] =>

I still hear those footsteps
Coming down those stairs
So clearly I see all of this
The room lit up so very brightly
As she walked into the room
So speechless I was
No words could describe
The feelings of my heart
I was so very shy
I will not lie about this
My eyes locked with hers
I was so very blinded
By what I saw In her
I would not mistake this
For I knew I was looking at an angel
I saw it then as I see it now
So very clearly not blinded at all
I knew this then as I know it now
What I saw that day and still this day today
Is and will always be love at first sight
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 24 [informant] => jcline5 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

loves first sight

Contributed by jcline5 on Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 12:28:22 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I still hear those footsteps
Coming down those stairs
So clearly I see all of this
The room lit up so very brightly
As she walked into the room
So speechless I was
No words could describe
The feelings of my heart
I was so very shy
I will not lie about this
My eyes locked with hers
I was so very blinded
By what I saw In her
I would not mistake this
For I knew I was looking at an angel
I saw it then as I see it now
So very clearly not blinded at all
I knew this then as I know it now
What I saw that day and still this day today
Is and will always be love at first sight

Copyright © jcline5 ... [ 2010-10-29 00:28:22]
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Re: loves first sight (User Rating: 1 )
by RowenM on Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 12:35:47 PM AEST
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If it were about me, i'd be very flattered.
;)
It's a really great memory. Those are the ones worth remembering!

Re: loves first sight (User Rating: 1 )
by nrazak1 on Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 03:58:06 PM AEST
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I agree with the person who commented before me. It's very sweet.
And that is a memory everyone wants to keep with them. I know i'll never forget mine.
I like this poem a lot!

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