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Array ( [sid] => 162949 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Love [time] => 2010-10-27 08:03:04 [hometext] => ((The way love can make us feel at times)) [bodytext] => Your love wont let me be
Wont let me see

Your love . it feels like destiny
Your love is that tenth symphony


Your love wont let me live
Wont let me take, wont let me give

Your love just wont let up
And I’m just so fed up

Your love is just so worth knowing
Your love is what keeps me going

Your love is why I fall apart, your love is why ifeel complete
Your love is battle, mind and heart, fighting, and mind just cant compete

Your love just makes no freaking sense
Your love is simply too intense


Your live is like an autumn breeze
Your love is kids at chucky cheese

Your love is hell
Your love is Joseph in the well

Your love at times ruins my mood
Your love is rude

It barges in, it interrupts
Your love just drives me freaking nuts

Your love is that struggle within
Your love has warn my patience thin



Your love is joy
It makes this man feel like a boy

your love is food your love is air
your love is why I dare to dare

your love is I walk away, your love is why I fight

your love is day, your love is night

your love is why I write
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 277 [topic] => 48 [informant] => po-it [notes] => Please do not comment on your own work. Your comment on this poem has been removed. You can send someone a private message if you wish to thank them. Thank you. Moderator_18 Oct 28, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Your Love

Contributed by po-it on Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 08:03:04 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Your love wont let me be
Wont let me see

Your love . it feels like destiny
Your love is that tenth symphony


Your love wont let me live
Wont let me take, wont let me give

Your love just wont let up
And I’m just so fed up

Your love is just so worth knowing
Your love is what keeps me going

Your love is why I fall apart, your love is why ifeel complete
Your love is battle, mind and heart, fighting, and mind just cant compete

Your love just makes no freaking sense
Your love is simply too intense


Your live is like an autumn breeze
Your love is kids at chucky cheese

Your love is hell
Your love is Joseph in the well

Your love at times ruins my mood
Your love is rude

It barges in, it interrupts
Your love just drives me freaking nuts

Your love is that struggle within
Your love has warn my patience thin



Your love is joy
It makes this man feel like a boy

your love is food your love is air
your love is why I dare to dare

your love is I walk away, your love is why I fight

your love is day, your love is night

your love is why I write




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Re: Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 09:01:51 AM AEST
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you have an amazing piece there please keep up the good work :)


Re: Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by potentialpoet96 on Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 12:29:26 PM AEST
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this was great.. keep it up (:


Re: Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by RowenM on Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 05:49:58 PM AEST
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The rhyme is awesome.
The message is clearly expressed.
I loved the vernacular lines lik e "freaking nuts"
;)


Re: Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by jcline5 on Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 07:59:29 AM AEST
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i know this feeling so very well i am going through it as well try to read some of my stuff and you can see how i deal jcline5




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