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a single rose fades to black

The rain crawls outside the window
leaving you blind inside this isolated existence

It's quiet breath always lurking
with your smile on the trigger

Howls of denial come forth followed
by brains bleeding sanity

It begs thee to finish the bottle
so the fairytale aftermath
preludes your demise
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Shadows and Tears

Contributed by duff on Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 10:43:45 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Breaking your will to stand
a single rose fades to black

The rain crawls outside the window
leaving you blind inside this isolated existence

It's quiet breath always lurking
with your smile on the trigger

Howls of denial come forth followed
by brains bleeding sanity

It begs thee to finish the bottle
so the fairytale aftermath
preludes your demise

Copyright © duff ... [ 2010-10-26 22:43:45]
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Re: Shadows and Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 03:23:08 AM AEST
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i could read your poems all day long they have so much fire in them keep up the good work

Re: Shadows and Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by potentialpoet96 on Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 12:32:08 PM AEST
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keep it upp. fantastic write (:

Re: Shadows and Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 12:17:56 AM AEST
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Sad, dark, and dreary. I tend to think though, whether in a drunken stupor or just down right depressed, we'd end up in a worse place if one decides to kill one's self...kinda the ultimate karma.

Poem is very well done. If definitely put the scare in me.

Thanks,

Tim

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