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Array ( [sid] => 162924 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Where's my violin? [time] => 2010-10-25 21:56:59 [hometext] => ((I just wrote this. I've never shared. Would love some feedback)) [bodytext] => Well where’s my violin

The walls are closing in
My strength is wearing thin

And then creeps in the silence
And emptiness crawls in

And loneliness is at the door
Waiting to be let in

All all distraction fades away
And leaves me in my skin

Disarmed, alarmed, uncomfortable
And now the doubts dig in

They eat away till nothing’s left
They leave me bone and skin!

My self worth drains away
My chest calls on my chin

And inwards I just crumble down
I have nothing within

Nothing to hold me up
Nothing to help me win

I lost the battle and the war
So where’s my violin?

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Where's my violin?

Contributed by po-it on Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 09:56:59 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Well where’s my violin

The walls are closing in
My strength is wearing thin

And then creeps in the silence
And emptiness crawls in

And loneliness is at the door
Waiting to be let in

All all distraction fades away
And leaves me in my skin

Disarmed, alarmed, uncomfortable
And now the doubts dig in

They eat away till nothing’s left
They leave me bone and skin!

My self worth drains away
My chest calls on my chin

And inwards I just crumble down
I have nothing within

Nothing to hold me up
Nothing to help me win

I lost the battle and the war
So where’s my violin?

Copyright Â© po-it ... [ 2010-10-25 21:56:59]
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Re: Where's my violin? (User Rating: 1 )
by PetaWilliams on Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 06:03:03 AM AEST
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Thats really good!!!!! i absoloutly love it really!! :D good work!

Re: Where's my violin? (User Rating: 1 )
by PetaWilliams on Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 07:42:47 AM AEST
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haha lol really i cant stop reading it i keep coming back to it it is really amazing, :D

Re: Where's my violin? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 03:29:34 AM AEST
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wow amazing i do hope you keep it up you have such a talent that you need to share :)

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