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connecting with your soul.
The first word,
speaking from your heart.
The first touch,
soft, gentle, endering.
The first kiss,
never skipping a beat.
Sitting there, gazing at the stars.
Your soul consumes me as I listen to the
waves meet the sand.
Clam quiet, peaceful,
speaking words of truth
coming from the depths of our being.
I gaze into your eyes, into you.
This all seems so unreal, amazing, perfect. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ShadowsCloud [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

First

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The first look,
connecting with your soul.
The first word,
speaking from your heart.
The first touch,
soft, gentle, endering.
The first kiss,
never skipping a beat.
Sitting there, gazing at the stars.
Your soul consumes me as I listen to the
waves meet the sand.
Clam quiet, peaceful,
speaking words of truth
coming from the depths of our being.
I gaze into your eyes, into you.
This all seems so unreal, amazing, perfect.

Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2003-04-20 13:05:00]
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Re: First (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 02:33:26 PM AEST
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a perfect poem.

Re: First (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 04:05:17 PM AEST
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absolutely breathtaking
Shari

Re: First (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 03:11:41 AM AEST
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a beautiful write, of a beautiful love...
kara

Re: First (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:37:11 PM AEST
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this is pretty. i love it. i wish everything could be like this. then life would be perfect! thanks for the showing.

Re: First (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 02:51:17 PM AEST
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Was this a dream Candice or for real?

I cannot think of somwhere better than on the beach gazing at the stars in between gazing into eyes while having a lovely canoodling and conversation session with the one!

Wonderful imagery again here, wishing I were experiencing these feelings again tonight, and your words have helped my imagination.

Thankyou Candice

With love
Dean:-)

Re: First (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 02:57:48 PM AEST
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Dean,
It is more dream, that real. But there is some reality it in, as it was written about Darik. I am glad that you like it.

ShadowsCloud

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