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make my day
Contributed by
kerissasmith
on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 03:23:32 AM in AEST
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im 14 years old
i have alot of troubles in my life,
so i like to just get away, so that is why,
everyday after school i type in,
Yourpoetry.com
this is my own secret place, to share how i feel
with all of you guys and girls and your great poetry too
when i see a comment on my poetry,
im happy, sometimes so happy it makes me cry.
the smallest, simplest comments fill me with joy.
to see you like like my poetry and me being this age
it makes my day.
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kerissasmith
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Re: make my day
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fern on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 07:12:55 AM AEST (User
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I'm about to make your day! You have a natural talent for writing and for putting your thoughts together in a way that's clearly understood. You are so young...you can go all the way. Keep developing your writing skills and before you know it there will be people waiting in ling lines to have you sign the book they just purchased from you. |
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Re: make my day
(User Rating: 1 ) by Maple_Lion on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 10:26:32 AM AEST (User
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Glad we can make you smile. |
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