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Why Did I?
Contributed by
girlbballjunky101
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Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 07:07:36 AM in AEST
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why did i email her?
why did i send that message?
why do i smile, when i see her face?
why is it she can bring back so many memories?
but i can't tell if the're good or bad....
what IF they are bad?
will i end up, to where i'm about to cry?
or will i smile, IF they are good?
what is going on?
i can't hear or see what's happening....
why can't i move past her....
((like my friends said to))
why did i smile back at her,
when she said my name?
is the game plan about to change?
the future is about to change, so i've been told
but how can i tell?
why is it she's calling me "cutie"?
why do i smile, when she says that?
why do i think about what we had?
i just don't get it....
why did i send the message
insteadof hitting the delete botton?
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Re: Why Did I?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fern on
Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 10:23:20 AM AEST (User
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My my my...your poem asks a lot of questions. Seems like you're having a hard time letting go. I hope you can, though, and move ahead with your life and your dreams. Your poem is very emotional and very very well-written. I hope you continue writing. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work! |
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Re: Why Did I?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 04:48:49 PM AEST (User
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It seems like this poem is filled with pain. It also seems that you cant let her go. You should get back together and see where life takes you. |
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Re: Why Did I?
(User Rating: 1 ) by kerissasmith on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 04:00:42 PM AEST (User
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very nice writing!
you seem very confused.. |
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Re: Why Did I?
(User Rating: 1 ) by NewGuy on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 11:30:55 PM AEST (User
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isnt it fuuny how we can let some stuff go so quickly and so easily, and some stuff just hangs with us, seems like forever. I can definently relate |
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Re: Why Did I?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 07:00:19 AM AEST (User
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grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! |
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